POETRY JAM
asks us to use a verb
PREVARICATE!
(An Acrostic)
Perhaps I'll do it, perhaps I will.
Really, I ought to pay that bill.
Eventually I may stir myself,
Vacuum the floor or dust the shelf,
Arrange my affairs or make the bed,
Rearrange the garden shed,
Iron the shirts or wash the dog,
Cook a pie or write my blog.
At the moment I'm feeling frail;
Telling-me-off is to no avail.
Everything is too much for me.
I'll do it tomorrow, you wait and see!
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In memory of Gerald Gee
FITFUL SUN
A day of storm, of lowering clouds,
Of scudding winds and passing showers.
And yet the sun can pierce the gloom,
Such are its powers.
The hills reveal themselves, then hide.
The colours change from dun to brass.
Strange shapes appear and then re-form
Along the grass.
And, suddenly, a trumpet sounds;
A brilliance spreads itself around.
The sun has found its voice once more
And what a sound!
The yellow, gold, canary tones
Are dazzling to the grey-filled eye!
We greet the fitful sun once more.........
Then say goodbye.
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9 comments:
Your acrostic is so smooth! Wow!
Love the acrostic... self-justification run wild (I should know).
def a rather smooth style to your acrostic...works well as dialogue and gets the verb across well...
I LOVE your verb poem! So whimsical and the rhythm and pace are good too. Good word to choose! Also like the second poem about the gray and sunshine--and especially like the picture you put with it.
I love the flow and message! Sounds a lot like me!
Enjoyed the acrostic. In addition to being about 'prevaricate' if it weren't an acrostic it could be entitled 'procrastinate.'
enjoyed both poems!
As a master procrastinator, I can say that I love the acrostic and am thoroughly impressed by the addition of rhyme. Your second poem is heartbreaking but with just a touch of hope. Two very well-written poems.
Witty and enjoyable acrostic!
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