CARRY ON TUESDAY
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asks us to use the words in blue from song-writer
Merle Haggard.
asks us to use the words in blue from song-writer
Merle Haggard.
LIFE'S LIKE POETRY
Life's like poetry. Sometimes it rhymes,
But there are often other times
When try as you may, it just won't scan,
Or nothing seems to rhyme with 'can'.
'Streams of consciousness' just wont stream;
You point your torch but it lacks a beam.
You have a thought that quickly flies
Out of the window into the skies.
Doggerel flows but makes no sense;
The nothingness is quite immense.
But then there are days when words take wing
And life and poetry seem to sing.
Some days are better, some are worse
And the same equation applies to verse.
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IT'S ALL IN THE TONE
It isn't just the words alone;
The trick is mastering the 'sarky' tone.
Practise with the words above,
But don't say them like words of love!
Of course, the 'AND' is pretty telling,
Making the message quite compelling.
And the key-word, 'AREN'T', must be emphasised
So the hearer knows he's been chastised.
So much said with so much brevity
Without the slightest hint of levity.
She doesn't even need to say
'You haven't lifted a finger all day!!!!!!!'
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8 comments:
Now that was pretty good aye!
I so hate those days when nothing seems to come together and all I can manage is garbage. And as far as the second one...you hit the nail on the head with the tone....it is all in the tone. Great Poems.
I enjoyed both of these. Haven't we all felt like the first.
I loved the line: You point your torch but it lacks a beam.
Well, you sure had no problems composing great poems!
Very nice set...I am learning to rhyme but I struggle with it.
And yes, its all in the tone and expression of my face..he..he...
Happy day ~
These are both quite true! I really can relate to the first, but what writer can't?
Ahh I wish I could rhyme HALF as well! These were delightful!
it won't scan remind me of trying to make a lot of copies in the middle of a meeting and the machine just won't...you know what i mean???
gainfully employed
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