HAIKU WEDNESDAY
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5/7/5 syllables
RELIEF
Tension drains away.
I lie back in the fresh grass.
And I am newborn.
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BIRTHDAYS
(An Acrostic)
Birthdays should aways make us glad!
If only we weren't sometimes sad
Realising that years go past
Too quickly! Every year more fast!
How once we welcomed every one!
Delighting in the birthday fun!
As time goes by we get a shock!
Years tick like a ticking clock!
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8 comments:
pure relaxation
nice haiku
I can feel the grass and relaxing ~ thanks ~ namaste, Carol ^_^
A terrific haiku! Nature heals.
Rinkly - I enjoyed both of your pieces ... nicely done! I love cloud watching -- a mini vacation in the grass!!
I need a relaxing break. Need a long weekend I think.
I love the haiku! It would be nice to have warm weather with new grass.
Really sweet haiku and lovely acrostic:)
I crave that kind of relief! Nicely done :)
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