IMAGINARY GARDEN
asks us to attempt a tanaga
ESTUARY
Time, like rivers , flows away,
What became of yesterday?
Is it out there, shining, free,
In the past's eternal sea?
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PUSH-OVER!
Microfiction
I saw you push her in the drink!
So quickly I didn't have time to blink!
No! It was you! I'm glad you came!
Now someone else can take the blame!
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10 comments:
Bravo!!! Two water themed tanagas and both eliciting intense emotion. You rose well to the challenge!
You were so quick to work this form. I love the first one - the metaphoric estuary and the questioning tone seems just right, and the second is great fun. Thank you for attempting the tanaga for with the Real Toads.
Clever! you make it look easy. Thanks for giving me courage!
Enjoyed both of them!
Well done.
You really got the demand of an answer with the first one. My favorite of the two.
You really got the 'demand an answer' concept down with the first of these two.
Estuary is a beautiful word to use and this was my favorite of the two.
Wow..great job..I struggled to write one and I am not sure I succeeded with tanaga
Very nice form...I like both of them ~
The first one is beautiful, Brenda. I love the third line.
I love the beauty of the first one. The second is so fun!
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