WATERY WEDNESDAY
once again!
OVERFLOW
I love to watch the overflow that streams out of the pool.
To keep the sea enclosed like that seems verging on the cruel!
When gross or giddy people have used it for their pleasure
The freedom of the open sea is something it must treasure.
I almost hear the separate drops saying to each other
'School's out! So come on boys! We're going home to Mother!'
More Merewether Beach Bliss here:
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2008/09/115-merry-weather.html
More Merewether Beach Bliss here:
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2008/09/115-merry-weather.html
7 comments:
To capture the sea has to be a sin!
Capture the sea? I've never heard of such a thing. Oh well, great picture and I like the oil tankers in the distance.
How perfect to have Watery Wednesday and ABC Wednesday together. I like your prose too.
Watery wed and w abc work so well.Cruel and pool rhyming is very creative.
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Both of these are such thought-provoking posts!
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How appropriate for you! ;-)
Do like the perspective and the colours here. Looks cool, refreshing.
the comparison of the gushing water with the school kids released to go home is perfect..!!
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