Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Too Hot To Handle!


Quite tricky this time because the number of syllables (8) per line was stipulated!

Touch a pan that is much too hot
'Ouch!' you'll say 'That has hit the spot!'
Over-zealous over-heating
Hurts the hands! They take a beating!
Oven-mitts are made for just this,
To let you give hot oil a miss!
Turn the heat down when you're cooking!
Or hands will get lobster-looking!
Heat is useful but it's nasty!
Attack that steamy Cornish pasty!
Never trust that you'll be lucky!
Don't be foolhardy or plucky!
Let all that boiling stuff get cool
Else you might be a scalded fool!
A different sort of culinary heat here:


Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

The truth, especially the raw "creative" poetic truth, can be so funny! I tell you I so enjoyed this.

LadyFi said...

Well done.. very funny.

Anonymous said...

lol..good one..

i needed to read something like that today..


Anonymous said...

oh i needed the laugh!

i felt i had already commented..but it won't take up!!


The Write Girl said...

I am late reading this, but I really enjoyed your acrostic. I love your rhyme and wit.

Maggie said...

This was very funny but then again so is life most of the time.

I enjoyed reading this treat.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

Brenda this was funny, but it was so creatively written. Congratulations you are a winner!

Go HERE to see how your work was presented and pick up your awards! You might need to scan down to your name or look on archive and click on the prompt title.

Kat said...

Wow... with a 8 syllable rule and writing about heat and advice on cooking, is pretty tough.!

Loved it.