SENSATIONAL HAIKU
'malice'
5/7/5
MALICE
That worm in the soul
Eating its evil way out.
The desire to hurt.
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DAMNED SPOT!
(A lot of story in a few words!)
Out, out, damned spot! The murder's done!
No more visits from my boss's son!
Plunging in the knife was lots of fun!
I hope these sheets bleach in the sun!
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10 comments:
Marvelous Haiku RR!!
creepy poems today!
nice job!
great imagery
worming in the soul and heart
Both offerings ~ stellar!!!
Although, I strongly dislike, Malice and Maliciousness --- nicely captured for the prompt!
Great work...a dark tale told in your haiku
Nice haiku, it's a bit creepy, but it's worth reading.
Interesting choice of sinister photo!
"That worm in the soul" - great line, and exactly what malice is! Well done!
I so love your humour and wit and deft use of words. Excellent!
I have my own haiku challenge for this week.
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