Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Malice


SENSATIONAL HAIKU
'malice'

5/7/5

MALICE

That worm in the soul
Eating its evil way out.
The desire to hurt.
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DAMNED SPOT!
(A lot of story in a few words!)

Out, out, damned spot! The murder's done!
No more visits from my boss's son!
Plunging in the knife was lots of fun!
I hope these sheets bleach in the sun!
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10 comments:

G-Man said...

Marvelous Haiku RR!!

Tara Tyler said...

creepy poems today!
nice job!

zongrik said...

great imagery

worming in the soul and heart

Helen said...

Both offerings ~ stellar!!!

beccagivens said...

Although, I strongly dislike, Malice and Maliciousness --- nicely captured for the prompt!

Susie Clevenger said...

Great work...a dark tale told in your haiku

Chèvrefeuille said...

Nice haiku, it's a bit creepy, but it's worth reading.

kkkkaty said...

Interesting choice of sinister photo!

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

"That worm in the soul" - great line, and exactly what malice is! Well done!

Madeleine said...

I so love your humour and wit and deft use of words. Excellent!
I have my own haiku challenge for this week.