SUNDAY 160
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(A comment on 'Aftermath' in 160 characters)
ACCIDENTAL GRACE
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(A comment on 'Aftermath' in 160 characters)
ACCIDENTAL GRACE
The enormity created elegance
The bare bones back-lit
Brought grace to the aftermath.
And so we see the monument
Rising of its own volition.
The bare bones back-lit
Brought grace to the aftermath.
And so we see the monument
Rising of its own volition.
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DOORWAY TO HELL
Your body may be sick;
It is treated.
Your mind may be sick;
It is treated.
*
Today
There is no differentiation.
Pills, injections,
Therapies
Abound.
Above all there is sympathy.
*
But go back two hundred years
To a Mental Asylum
In New South Wales.
These steps,
This door
Would have struck terror to your very soul.
*
Maybe you awoke
Muddled,
Befuddled,
In a grey mist of uncertainty.
Who am I?
Where am I?
Maybe I am not here at all!
*
Maybe someone asked you something.
Maybe someone brushed up against you.
Maybe someone looked at you in a strange way.
Maybe you were made to eat unpleasant food.
*
For whatever reason
You cracked!
The whole world exploded
In a bewildering array
Of flashes,
Noises,
Sensations you could not describe.
*
To escape, you flailed your arms,
Screamed,
Kicked,
Yelled abuse.
The well-meaning attendants were powerless
Against your devilish strength!
*
Several of them pinioned your arms,
Tied you in a straight-jacket,
Frog-marched you to the steps,
To The Door.
And locked you in.
*
There, in the dark
You suffered alone.
Until reason prevailed.
*
Or until you died.
*
Be thankful.
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5 comments:
nice...i really like your 160...a wonderful shop as well...will they build it back?
Hello Brenda. Thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment. Not everyone does. We don't have many earthquakes in the cape so the fact that you were here when one took place was a privilege and something you will remember for the rest of your life. Yes I'm thankful but not insane just forgiven.
Meaningful takes.
Both pieces are hauntingly beautiful.
I really like your 160 - a great take on the photo, the words are just right...
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