Monday, September 12, 2011

Moving


SIX WORD FRIDAY


Six letters, six words, six lines.

MOVING
(An acrostic)

Six letters, six words, six lines

Motivation is the really vital key.
Often we are overcome by lethargy
Various excuses raise a weary head.
It seems much superior in bed.
Now's the time to spurn inaction.
Get up! Get out! Experience satisfaction!
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RUSTED REMNANT
(A cinquain)

Metal.
Ancient technology.
Twisted, ugly, discarded.
Yet tinted by time.
Conduit.
*

3 comments:

Jingle Poetry said...

the image is dynamic and beautiful.

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Melissa said...

Oh, I am prone to inaction!
Will overcoming this bring me satisfaction?
Or will I just be more tired? ;)