Monday, September 5, 2011

Advice


                                      Ashley
SIMPLY SNICKERS
gave us five words and I was able to solve all the problems of the World with them!

ADVICE

Lies and hard labour are not all there is to life.
Let love linger  and you will conquer strife.
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THE COMMUTER

Pensive, withdrawn, silent.
Listlessly lolling, unobtrusive, rocked by motion.
Rocked by emotion? Who can tell?
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3 comments:

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Impressive use of that prompt, and I enjoyed Commuter too.

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Love the labour of loving wisdom!

The Write Girl said...

I enjoyed your advice. The Commuter poem is a sweet piece as well. The artwork in both poems is a lovely touch.