Saturday, August 22, 2009


I had planned on a meme-free month (to attack the dust under the beds!) but I couldn't resist an Acrostic! Who needs crossword puzzles?

suggests this word.


Round and round humanity marches
Emerging from eternal arches
In an incessant catch-up game,
Never escaping praise or blame
Can it be you've been courageous?
Are your sins just too outrageous?
Rated! That's how you will be!
Neatly labeled A.B.C.
And can you bear to face the fact
That this wont be the final act?
It may be you'll come back a bug
Or a slippery slimy slug!
Next time I do this earthly tour
I'll watch my Ps and Qs for sure!

Another view of eternity here:


Quilly said...

Aha! You couldn't stay away. I knew I should have started a betting pool on when you'd crack! ;)

Once again, your rhymes are making me laugh. Next time, I'm coming back as a Beverly Hills lapdog.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I read this several times, but when I came back I realize I had not commented. This is so much fun to read ... and I will be back to read it again.

Loch Rob said...

Nice composition. A little whimsical too. I liked it alot.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I am back reading it again ..!

Jukota said...

You have a quick clever wit - and it rhymes! Bravo for a job well done! This was fun!

anthonynorth said...

A lot of Karma in that one. Enjoyed it.

SandyCarlson said...

So well done up and down, left and right.

Amity said...

Hi Brenda,

this is one great acro work! two birds in one bullet!

it's frightening to get reincarnated esp if one becomes a slimy slug!

good morning to you!


Amity said...

nice post Brenda, two birds in one bullet, an acro for AO and for OSI...

good interpretation of the prompt...

should there is really reincarnation, i wouldn't want to be a slimy slug!

good day Brenda!

PS the Pratsie said...

woooooowwwwww !!!!! i jst loved the rhyme here :D

Sherri B. said...

So clever! I really enjoyed this, and it flowed so seamlessly.

Tumblewords: said...

As always, a smile and a delightful read.

gautami tripathy said...

Great rhyming!

time and time again

Kill Word Verification

gabrielle said...

Spry rhyming. I enjoyed this!

Kat said...

The poem's outcome was worth postponing the dust clearance under the bed..!!

mmm... you are talking about Karma... the good news is... as you're born a human being in this birth... its obvious you've got an excellent grade in previous birth :)))) Congrats.