FLYING LESSON
Daily I sit here on the fence,
Wearing a puzzled frown;
Why do his wings go round and round
When mine go up and down?
*
A helicopter joke here:
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2009/11/hang-in-there.html
Wearing a puzzled frown;
Why do his wings go round and round
When mine go up and down?
*
A helicopter joke here:
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2009/11/hang-in-there.html
22 comments:
Great MYM entry... and love more the thought....
Indulge
An Ordinary Day
Brilliant!!!
OMG! I'm so glad that isn't a raven hanging out next to the helicopter.
hands down, this is the best MYM entry i have seen so far :-) brilliant indeed!
Mellow Yellow
Great one for mellow yellow Monday.
Great little poem. Sorry I haven't been around for a while, been very busy. Getting ready now to go mow the backyard. It's good exercise.
That's a great shot and creative lines!!
Happy MYM.
Flower clock
Cute verse. It would be fun to go up in that helicopter.
That is really cute! Thanks so much.
What a great pic, to catch the magpie there.
Great verse too.
All the best,
Jan
A Perplexing Paradox.
Tis is lovely, Brenda, made me smile. :-)
Cute take on the 'wings' prompt, Brenda!
Nice one!
Pamela
Great take on flight! Gave me a wonderful big smile on this grey Vancouver day...thank you...:)
Lynette
This is awesome Brenda!!! I love it!
:-)
Very clever. You had me spinning with laughter.
Very clever. You had me spinning with laughter.
Hee hee. Good one!
What a wonderful image of the power and possibilities of flight!
Eileen
Fascinating piece with a bit of humor in it, made me smile and contemplate. I will defer from over analyzing its deeper meaning though.
awesome.
smart take.
from poets untied.
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