Monday, January 24, 2011

Push-Over!



MICROFICTION

PUSH-OVER!

I saw you push her in the drink!
So quick I didn't have time to blink!
No! It was you! I'm glad you came!
Now someone else can take the blame!
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Seen in a Charity Shop
LABELLED 'LEMON'

Bric-a-brac and throw-aways no-one ever mentions,
No longer feel too sorry for themselves.
For they've been set-out tastefully, with artistic intentions,
Ready to grace other peoples' shelves.
All this lemon loveliness, seemingly respected,
Laid out on a table with good grace.
And even their own table-top hasn't been neglected!
See a cloth of decorative lace!
They thought they were discarded, to be thrown out in the bin,
Labelled with that awful 'second-hand',
But now they are co-ordinated, once more they can win!
For the second time in life they're feeling grand!
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21 comments:

Sylvia K said...

Ah! It's murder mystery time and how perfect to have someone else to blame! Great one for the day, Brenda! Hope you have lovely week!

Sylvia

Pat said...

Ooh, we have a liar, liar, pants on fire character here. What a schemer. Love it, as always!

Mama Zen said...

I really like the microfiction!

Peggy said...

You are so good with the MF's.
I love to read your rhymes!
Have a nice week.

Kay L. Davies said...

Ooh, a sneaky take on the Microfiction prompt, Brenda. The plot thickens!
When I saw your charity shop photo, I thought someone had given these lemons a lot of thought, too. Someone is sure to see a treasure in there.
-- K

Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

The River knows for sure. A nice Microfiction.

Diane said...

Really great one! Perfect way to capture it. :O)

Dianne said...

fantastic poem :)

moondustwriter said...

Sounds like children

Nice Microfiction

Have a great week

sylviamorice said...

Nice to have someone else to take the blame for a change...good mm!

Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape said...

ooooh, this is going to get intense, I want to know what happens next!

KB said...

Nice micro. Thanks for visiting mine last week.

Jinksy said...

Loved this sneaky MFM! lol :)

izzy said...

Blame indeed ! now for the fingerprints-
Thanks.

5thsister said...

lovin' the sing song rhyme to this! Great job!

Madeleine said...

Aha, yes I thought they looked kinda suspicious too LOL! :O)
Hope the lady setting out those lemon lovelies hasn't got lemon lips too!

Mary said...

Funny! Good one.

Elizabeth Mueller said...

ooh, you do live up to the name of your blog! I love your rimes!

♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

Susan Fobes said...

Oh my, some of these are dark... Nicely done!

Jim said...

Very good on the rhymes, Brenda! :)

I'm wondering why neither of them is trying to fish her out of the drink?
..

SparkleFarkle said...

"I saw you push her in the drink!
So quick I didn't have time to blink!
No! It was you! I'm glad you came!
Now someone else can take the blame!
"

This reads like one of those intro pages in a delightfully macabre "Who Dunnit?", that you just know you're not going to be able to put down!