BEN
Ben said 'A place for everything
And everything in it's place'!
How did the old chap realise
My drawers are a disgrace?
His words have echoed in my ears
Each day, more or less;
Always in my mother's voice;
Yet I'm always in a mess.
But deep inside this muddler
Is a person who is neat.
And even in my waning years
I can't admit defeat.
I buy big boxes from the store;
This time I'll organise!
This time I'll follow Ben's advice;
There will be no compromise.
But then I forget to label them,
So I scrabble deep within
To find an item I've mislaid!
I simply cannot win!
Sometimes I tip the boxful out
Then shove it back again.
I really will be neat next time.
But when is next time? When?
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But I wonder if old Benjamin
Was such a neatness freak.
If I could find his chest-of-drawers
I'd like to take a peek.
I bet they were an awful mess,
If only we could see.
Maybe he wasn't as honest
As little old scruffy me!
Have a look at my picture!
See 'stuff' strewn on the floor!
Goodness gracious Benjamin!
That's what boxes are for!
So now I'm going to rustle up
A homily myself.....
'Don't believe Ben Franklin
Till you've checked-out every shelf!'
17 comments:
I love it! You must have taken a peek at my house. But it isn't just my boxes and drawers that are disaster areas. My whole house is!
Love that poem and the picture too.
Granny Smith and I have a lot in common, not just The Beatles. My whole house is a mess too. I used to blame the kiddiwinks when they were at home and I was working but I have to confess, since I retired I've realised it's mainly me. Maybe I'll blame my grandchildren, well they're here a lot, but I wouldn't have it any other way. My Mam used to always say that the house would be there when she wasn't. Sadly true.
I always have to remember to start each day, now, in the mess, rather than wait for an orgnaized existence.
A place for everything seems to be something to aspire to, yet never achieve.
"....If I could find his chest-of-drawers
I'd like to take a peek.
I bet they were an awful mess,.."
I have met people who are really well organised and I've envied them.
even when they aren't around, I've seen that things are so proper.
One of these days I to owill get out of these enquire, search and seize operations..!!!!
Very funny and clever post! I love to be tidy and organised, but mostly I'm only semi of both. How can I possibly have a tidy house when I live with 2 teenage boys? :)
I am pretty disorganized, I'm afraid, but spring cleaning is just around the corner...
wait, I don't do spring cleaning!
oh well...
OMG! This is a super post! When I am creating art, I follow Ben's rule. But in my everyday life, whatever happens, happens!!
I'm a very organized person, but it's tiring to keep up with two kids, so I give up! I'm thinking of hiring a cleaning lady now :-(
You're a genius!
I wish a were neat! Wonder if he really was?
Wow. This is great! How clever you are to craft a poem about disorganization. You could have definitely used me for inspiration on this particular subject for sure!
I enjoy your wry twist for the letter B this week.
Thank you for linking.
A+
Oh darn it, now my dirty secret is out... Where are those boxes! But maybe us messies just have better things to do...? Well done, Brenda... AGAIN!
Another great rhyme!
=)
So much like me. I always have good intentions. I'm so envious of organized people. In fact, on my blog I have the quote, "Organized people are just too lazy to look for things."
Cool rhyme inspired by a cool man!
truly great! I just loved reading that! Thanks for sharing your poem!
How fun! I think I need to go clean.
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