Monday, October 4, 2010

Jumping Boy


MELLOW YELLOW
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JUMPING BOY

A boy in a Jumping Castle,
Full of concentration,
Happy in his own little world,
A world of his own creation.
What does he think as he leaps around,
Like some animal caged-in?
Soon he'll see us watching
And he'll dart us a flashing grin.
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TORNADO
(Acrostic)

Tearing across the sky
Overtaking lesser clouds.
Rushing, reeling, rolling by,
Nothing escapes....buildings, crowds!
Angry, a tube of wicked misery!
Dive for cover!
Or blow to eternity!
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7 comments:

sillyfrogsusan said...

Magnificent poetry...just the way I like it!

Marites said...

boy is cute! seems quite busy with what he's doing...have a good week!

Liz said...

Great shot!

Happy MYM.

Liz @ MLC

eileeninmd said...

Cute captures of the yellow. Happy MYM!

Kat said...

Max'll think - looking at us.... Why're these caged-out animals intensely watching me..!

The poem blows with intensity.. Like a tornado.

Kay L. Davies said...

Children just love jumping, and in one of these they can jump without getting hurt. Much easier on the mothers, aunts and grandmothers who are watching!

Kay, Alberta

Erratic Thoughts said...

Oh I could almost imagine the l'il fella in front of me...very sweet, especially the grin in the end!:)
TORNADO was a power-punch!
"blow to eternity",indeed!