Magritte
(Written for the SIMPLY SNICKERS prompt. A SUNDAY SCRIBBLINGS effort can be seen below.)
THE PARTING OF THE WAYS.
So you see a bird!
I aways knew we were incompatible!
How dull you are;
Seeing what you think you have to see.
Doing as you're told!
Your horizon limited by what you think you should see.
A mere human in a world of angels!
So bland, so conventional, so boring!
I'll give you the horizon;
I'll give you the horizon;
That I also see.
But a bird?
Don't be absurd!
I see a grey, blotched wall
And an oddly-shaped window.
The top swoops down like a twister;
The left-hand side bears a startling resemblance
To a chimp begging for a kiss;
And, on the right, there's a hill
With an interesting cave.
I long to squeeze through that jagged window
And hover in that blue sky,
Like a bird.
But my own bird, not yours.
I'll pack my bags in the morning.
7 comments:
Very interesting Brenda.
Bear((( )))
Our perceptions are always so different! I love this lively poem and I can see you packing your suitcase!
very well done... and yes... i saw a bird........
not any more tho ;)
Very clever and creative entries!
Thanks for participating at SIMPLY SNICKERS. Hope you will be back tomorrow for another prompt!
8-)
I saw the bird. but when I read your describe other things, yeah I can finally see it too.
we see want we want to see.
Delightful poem on different views!
Wow, you wiped the bird out of our eyes..!!!!
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