Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Spring Recollection


SENSATIONAL HAIKU WEDNESDAY

SPRING RECOLLECTION
(Written from an Autumnal Australia)

More than a season
An uprising of the heart
The greening of souls
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SO LITTLE DONE!

No time, no time the housewife cries
As all around her chaos lies.
'Beds to make and food to cook;
Where did you put your library book?
Lunches to pack, and hair to brush,
Homework to check! All I do is rush!'

No time, no time Grandfather sighs
'The days zoom past before one dies.
So many flowers and pretty faces,
Scenery, enchanting places,
So many things to see and do
I wish  had as much time as you.'
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7 comments:

Gemma Wiseman said...

Wonderful, romantic yearning in the haiku! And the poem offers a delightful contrast of perspectives and values!

ArtMuseDog and Carol said...

ah so true in your delightful haiku and your poem is speaking to me ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

Tara Tyler said...

time is so elusive!
insightful poetry =)

joanne said...

intelligent and interesting to read.....great haiku

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

"an uprising of the heart"

I am envisioning a revolution here!

Elusive Spring Storm

zongrik said...

uprising of the souls, that's heavy


spring haiku and tanka

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

Wonderful haiku - love the idea of "uprising of the heart". Nicely crafted!