Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Estuary


IMAGINARY GARDEN
asks us to attempt a tanaga

ESTUARY

Time, like rivers , flows away,
What became of yesterday?
Is it out there, shining, free,
In the past's eternal sea?
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PUSH-OVER!
Microfiction

I saw you push her in the drink!
So quickly I didn't have time to blink!
No! It was you! I'm glad you came!
Now someone else can take the blame!
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10 comments:

  1. LolamouseJanuary 19, 2012 at 3:57 AM

    Bravo!!! Two water themed tanagas and both eliciting intense emotion. You rose well to the challenge!

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  2. Kerry O'ConnorJanuary 19, 2012 at 4:07 AM

    You were so quick to work this form. I love the first one - the metaphoric estuary and the questioning tone seems just right, and the second is great fun. Thank you for attempting the tanaga for with the Real Toads.

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  3. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 19, 2012 at 6:08 AM

    Clever! you make it look easy. Thanks for giving me courage!

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  4. Laurie KolpJanuary 19, 2012 at 6:55 AM

    Enjoyed both of them!

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  5. cosmos camiJanuary 19, 2012 at 8:49 AM

    Well done.
    You really got the demand of an answer with the first one. My favorite of the two.

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  6. cosmos camiJanuary 19, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    You really got the 'demand an answer' concept down with the first of these two.
    Estuary is a beautiful word to use and this was my favorite of the two.

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  7. Susie ClevengerJanuary 19, 2012 at 9:10 AM

    Wow..great job..I struggled to write one and I am not sure I succeeded with tanaga

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  8. GraceJanuary 19, 2012 at 11:51 AM

    Very nice form...I like both of them ~

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  9. Kay L. DaviesJanuary 19, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    The first one is beautiful, Brenda. I love the third line.

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  10. TeresaJanuary 19, 2012 at 12:42 PM

    I love the beauty of the first one. The second is so fun!

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