Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Malice


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5/7/5

MALICE

That worm in the soul
Eating its evil way out.
The desire to hurt.
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DAMNED SPOT!
(A lot of story in a few words!)

Out, out, damned spot! The murder's done!
No more visits from my boss's son!
Plunging in the knife was lots of fun!
I hope these sheets bleach in the sun!
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10 comments:

  1. G-ManDecember 7, 2011 at 11:11 PM

    Marvelous Haiku RR!!

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  2. Tara TylerDecember 8, 2011 at 2:03 AM

    creepy poems today!
    nice job!

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  3. AnonymousDecember 8, 2011 at 3:47 AM

    great imagery

    worming in the soul and heart

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  4. HelenDecember 8, 2011 at 4:30 AM

    Both offerings ~ stellar!!!

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  5. beccagivensDecember 8, 2011 at 7:34 AM

    Although, I strongly dislike, Malice and Maliciousness --- nicely captured for the prompt!

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  6. Susie ClevengerDecember 8, 2011 at 5:21 PM

    Great work...a dark tale told in your haiku

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 8, 2011 at 6:24 PM

    Nice haiku, it's a bit creepy, but it's worth reading.

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  8. Kathy ReedDecember 9, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Interesting choice of sinister photo!

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  9. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?December 10, 2011 at 3:09 AM

    "That worm in the soul" - great line, and exactly what malice is! Well done!

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  10. AnonymousDecember 14, 2011 at 10:07 PM

    I so love your humour and wit and deft use of words. Excellent!
    I have my own haiku challenge for this week.

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