Monday, January 31, 2011

Personal Hygiene!


MICROFICTION
http://www.stonyriver.ie/2011/01/microfiction
A story in very few words

PERSONAL HYGIENE!

The girls will like you a great deal more
Without that damned B.O.!
Come on, Matie, dive in and wash!
 Froth-up in the undertow!
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RED, WHITE, AND BLUE!
I was strolling along in town one day when this Junk Shop caught my eye.
Now I was only idling, dreaming as I passed by.
I was thinking of writing a poem about Red, White and Blue;
( When a Meme suggests it, that is what must I do.)
'I must avoid the Union Jack!' was going through my mind
Followed by 'What alternative am I possibly going to find?'
Being a Brit, 'Red, White and Blue' had me standing to attention,
But then it seemed too obvious to even rate a mention.
When suddenly a window seemed to flash across my gaze!
And it filled the said criteria in really perfect ways!
Now, when the owner made a plan to change her window theme,
What made her think of this decor, this blended colour-scheme?
And what made me walk down that street? It's not my usual route!
And what made me glance at her window, so crammed with pre-loved loot?
I'm really not superstitious! I prefer reality.
But this was a great example of SERENDIPITY!
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19 comments:

  1. froth up in the undertow!! - I love that

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  2. Come on Matey, dive in!
    Brrrrr makes me cold just thinking about it!
    Nice one!

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  3. I like your µ-fiction, RR! The poem is good too!
    My µ-fiction is on the bathing theme also!
    What do they say about great minds?
    :)
    ..

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  4. You'll definitely do better, Matey, after a good bath!! Love it, Brenda!

    Sylvia

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  5. Good one, Brenda.
    -- K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  6. Funny idea -- froth up the undertow! Well phrased and clever!

    :)

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  7. I loved both poems, especially the red, white and blue one--very clever and witty, as your poems always are!

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  8. Brenda I love your poems! The first had me rolling!

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  9. Great MM and we sure do like em smelling clean! :O)

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  10. Love your microfiction! I hope he listens to his friend. A good washing is always sound advice!

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  11. You and I were both thinking along the same lines

    Ha - those sea dogs were ripe

    moonie chuckle

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  12. Oooh and it rhymes! Great, thanks-

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  13. That's some good advice from one mate to another! Well done :)

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  14. Marvellous voice to this. Your poems are always spot-on.

    Have a great week.

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  15. This really could be an ad jingle. Inspire the guys to get squeaky clean. Fun and creative.

    Hope you'll stop by: Bad Fit

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  16. Haha--we both noticed that these fishermen could use baths...wonderful!

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  17. Lol! Ain't that the truth, baby!

    Have a lovely weekend.

    ¸.•´♥Elizabeth

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  18. LOL. That speaks volume... direct to the point... do dive in. wink*

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