Saturday, January 8, 2011

Doubting Destiny


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chose the topic of 'Destiny'

DOUBTING DESTINY
I don't believe in Destiny or, as others call it, Fate.
I don't believe in Horoscopes, that label us by date.
I don't believe in Palmistry, lines are of no account,
And the art of Numerology, well, it doesn't really count.
I just believe in Chaos, or 'What will be will be'
For, after all, that's common-sense as far as I can see.
If I go out tomorrow and get knocked down by a car,
That won't be my Destiny, but just the way things are!
The little ant that crawls around, and ends up beneath my foot,
Wasn't destined to be there; he wasn't exactly 'put'.
My shoe and the little ant's wee life haven't shared some great event!
It's simply that the ant was there and 'Poof!' the ant just went!
I see myself as a little ant with just a bit more brain
And when I die I'm pretty sure I wont come back again!
For I don't believe Reincarnation  makes a lot of sense;
When I'm gone I'm gone for good; my life has departed hence.
I think it must be scary to be haunted by ideas
Like Destiny and Palmistry, that have been around for years.
I don't feel like a Puppet, which Believers all must be.
Maybe my disbelieving mind was part of my Destiny!:-)
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GOLDEN GLOW

Gwyneth's Victorian cottage.
A haven on a winter's night.
Butter-yellow washes the walls.
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7 comments:

  1. There's an awful lot of sense in what you write, not to mention the pleasure of rhyme and lilting rhythmn.

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  2. Beautifully put.
    Especially the allegory of the ant.

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  3. I love the line, "I believe in chaos." That describes my life to a 't'.

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  4. nicely done indeed....i really like the chaos line also...thanks for sharing this brenda

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  5. Brenda,

    I just love the way you write. Nice one on desitny....

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