Sunday, November 1, 2009

Stalker



ACROSTIC ONLY


STALKER!


Suddenly  I know he's there!
Turning, he's behind me!
Aspects of our love-affair
Leading him to find me!
Knowing what is in his heart
Every footstep taunts me!
Rejection played a fatal part
And retribution haunts me!
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More dangerous love here:




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16 comments:

  1. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)November 2, 2009 at 12:45 AM

    You are too good for your own good .. you can write your butt of! This is so true to life, it's scary to think about it.

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  2. Three Rivers, MichiganNovember 3, 2009 at 3:20 AM

    OoooOOoooh spooky.... wonderful photo and acrostic! I'd try one, if only I knew how to spell...

    Three Rivers Daily Photo

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  3. PS the PratsieNovember 3, 2009 at 1:56 PM

    well written ! simple yet so clear !

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  4. Yamini MeduriNovember 6, 2009 at 12:20 AM

    nicely written....so nice to read..!!!

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  5. MaggieNovember 6, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    You hit the nail on the head.

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  6. MeowNovember 12, 2009 at 11:34 PM

    Scary :( well put :)

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  7. AmityNovember 25, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    another face of a stalker!

    great write again!

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  8. Aoife.TroxelAugust 22, 2010 at 10:51 PM

    I like this. It has elements of fear, but mostly humour. A very different take on a stalker. :)

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  9. CarinaAugust 22, 2010 at 11:01 PM

    Ooh! A little eerie!

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  10. UnknownAugust 22, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    Wow, acrostic and rhyme without sounding forced, you make it sound so easy ;)

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  11. RoanAugust 23, 2010 at 12:39 AM

    Stalkers are the scariest. I see this type of torment too often in my work. Very well written, as usual.

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  12. Templeton's furyAugust 23, 2010 at 1:01 AM

    Time to change the locks!

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  13. Understanding AliceAugust 23, 2010 at 1:26 AM

    now there is a poem to make you look over your shoulder... fabulous :)

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  14. flaubertAugust 23, 2010 at 9:01 AM

    Now that is frightening and a fab poem!
    Pamela

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  15. Old EggAugust 23, 2010 at 5:19 PM

    Awesomely real. Scary but great.

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  16. ElizabethAugust 24, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    Just when I was beginning to feel safe and could relax again, good poem,

    Elizabeth

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