Thursday, August 6, 2009

Tornado




TORNADO
Acrostic


Tearing across the sky
Overtaking lesser clouds.
Rushing, reeling, rolling by,
Nothing escapes....buildings, crowds!
Angry, a tube of wicked misery!
Dive for cover!
Or blow to eternity!


Something more gentle here:
http://rinklyrimes.blogspot.com/2009/02/298-grey-wind.html
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4 comments:

  1. SunnyAugust 6, 2009 at 9:04 AM

    I really enjoy your poetry. Thanks for visiting my blog. I was born just outside St.Austell in Cornwall.
    Sunny :)

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  2. Mariana SofferAugust 6, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    Good short poem, I like the words and the sounds. I think even dough you might dive for cover you can end up blowiing in eternity, which is not necesarily a bad thing.

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  3. Margaret GosdenAugust 7, 2009 at 12:03 AM

    Not a bad thing if one ends up following the yellow brick road!

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  4. KatNovember 24, 2009 at 10:12 PM

    Fewer lines...
    but no gentle breeze...!
    the impact..!!!

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