tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post8778381678551025288..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: A Soldier's MemoryRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-63851942058896543862011-11-09T02:04:44.423+11:002011-11-09T02:04:44.423+11:00War is a terrible thing. Your poem is powerful. Yo...War is a terrible thing. Your poem is powerful. You've led us to the core of a soldier's pain. Well done.Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-69618962357558330142011-11-07T02:06:41.806+11:002011-11-07T02:06:41.806+11:00The image of war through the eyes of one combatant...The image of war through the eyes of one combatant is so much more effective than an overall view. This is a tremendous write.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-17030645519036214082011-11-07T01:31:29.345+11:002011-11-07T01:31:29.345+11:00Thanks for stopping by to read my wordle...I'm...Thanks for stopping by to read my wordle...I'm actually getting some time today to do the same.<br /><br />It seems "battles" of all kinds became the common denominator for those wordle words. Really well-captured internal struggle of soldiers. I liked how you started and ended with dappled shade.<br /><br />As for the bus -- if that thing came alive it would be my worst nightmare come true! I don't know that I could get on that bus! <br /><br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-62068244810205664332011-11-07T00:33:34.583+11:002011-11-07T00:33:34.583+11:00We all seem to have had the same idea from the wor...We all seem to have had the same idea from the wordle words. They just seem to have war and battles in them and I think it's also coming up for Remembrance Day on the 11th too.<br />Enjoyed both pieces, thank you.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-56778189555725527102011-11-06T19:09:44.236+11:002011-11-06T19:09:44.236+11:00I much prefer your wordle poem to mine. You have ...I much prefer your wordle poem to mine. You have gone right to the heart of the matter, one of the individual tragedies of war.<br /><br />I like your zoo bus poem as well, but it seemed a bit anticlimactic after the emotion of the soldier's story.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.com