tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post8643129172668305842..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Hidden SorrowRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-13990345997453636712011-09-09T23:28:19.078+10:002011-09-09T23:28:19.078+10:00Your usual expert use of poesie...Your usual expert use of poesie...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-49039914413210748402011-09-08T04:49:11.555+10:002011-09-08T04:49:11.555+10:00Lovely rhyming poem. Echoes how I
handle my feelin...Lovely rhyming poem. Echoes how I<br />handle my feelings at times.<br /><br />The poem is quiet like soft eroding.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-65645539954908839662011-09-08T04:04:29.280+10:002011-09-08T04:04:29.280+10:00Hidden Sorrow is really well done. Sad and percep...Hidden Sorrow is really well done. Sad and perceptive piece.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-23573490514138169912011-09-08T03:58:49.194+10:002011-09-08T03:58:49.194+10:00both exceptional poems though I must profess I lov...both exceptional poems though I must profess I love the first one best.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-14101404951950814902011-09-08T03:10:00.550+10:002011-09-08T03:10:00.550+10:00"Some things just quietly erode;
There's ..."Some things just quietly erode;<br />There's no explosive dying.<br />The iron that rusts, the flower that dies,<br />The knot that is untying."<br /><br />I love that - no explosive dying, very well said.<br /><br />and 'filigree' is just so beautiful!<br /><br />I enjoyed my visit here. :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-56022691941864521152011-09-08T02:40:47.787+10:002011-09-08T02:40:47.787+10:00Wise words!Wise words!andy sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-65452963087574835142011-09-08T02:07:48.871+10:002011-09-08T02:07:48.871+10:00How sad the person must be in your 3WW prompt. Suc...How sad the person must be in your 3WW prompt. Such loneliness and not able to share it. <br />Love the Filigree, beautiful.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-34078837718261419872011-09-08T00:39:08.008+10:002011-09-08T00:39:08.008+10:00Another great poem from you rinkly rimes! But oh s...Another great poem from you rinkly rimes! But oh so sad. Do you think its the natural conclusion from the word "erode"?Springcyclehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897733910237655639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-61825588552694466112011-09-07T23:59:57.391+10:002011-09-07T23:59:57.391+10:00Great use of the three word prompt. So relatable.
...Great use of the three word prompt. So relatable.<br />BlessingsBethe77https://www.blogger.com/profile/07908965956063875893noreply@blogger.com