tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post7991742922954115339..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Blue BirdsRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-91842146964876165162010-12-18T01:36:25.792+11:002010-12-18T01:36:25.792+11:00Now I'm kind of intrigued to read more about t...Now I'm kind of intrigued to read more about the story behind the birds. You executed rhyme pretty well, it was subtle, and I didn't really notice it until later in the poem.<br /><br />-NicoleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-83023587074431328272010-05-18T15:56:02.729+10:002010-05-18T15:56:02.729+10:00I do love the story within the story, and your rhy...I do love the story within the story, and your rhyming makes it incredible to read out loud.Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-48904315739189212912010-05-18T08:07:26.210+10:002010-05-18T08:07:26.210+10:00what flying magpie,
very cool talents!what flying magpie,<br />very cool talents!Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-3997619420949106672010-05-18T00:39:16.971+10:002010-05-18T00:39:16.971+10:00I loved the rhyming.
Representing that great love ...I loved the rhyming.<br /><i>Representing that great love that came to nought.<br />And we look at those two soaring birds and give a little smile<br />Giving unrequited love a passing thought.</i><br />Really liked these lines. The tile is awfully pretty. I want it!Aoife.Troxelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08557613486797904602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-84151973289186368462010-05-17T23:10:44.736+10:002010-05-17T23:10:44.736+10:00The Karma acrostic tells it all..poor lovers, stil...The Karma acrostic tells it all..poor lovers, still trying to attach..when all is as one anyway...thank you...Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-24856589751747932282010-05-17T19:30:31.511+10:002010-05-17T19:30:31.511+10:00Beautifully written beautifully said, nice take on...Beautifully written beautifully said, nice take on the magpie tale,<br /><br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-36800615769766718892010-05-17T14:10:53.738+10:002010-05-17T14:10:53.738+10:00Oh, yes! And the Karma acoustic is just right.Oh, yes! And the Karma acoustic is just right.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-5277697445228727762010-05-17T09:45:53.580+10:002010-05-17T09:45:53.580+10:00I really enjoyed this when I read it out loud...
N...I really enjoyed this when I read it out loud...<br />Nice take on the plateSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-60094468997232172982010-05-16T08:03:24.480+10:002010-05-16T08:03:24.480+10:00oh, the story behind the story assignment. :)oh, the story behind the story assignment. :)Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05440632162084471888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-36135228488325013542010-05-16T05:47:55.278+10:002010-05-16T05:47:55.278+10:00Bitter sweet writing, the two lovers forever toget...Bitter sweet writing, the two lovers forever together but never touching. I love your interpretation of the story.<br />Christinechristinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08720643762397784519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-60755488905029686932010-05-16T01:57:05.304+10:002010-05-16T01:57:05.304+10:00I loved this!!! It reads like a little song!!! H...I loved this!!! It reads like a little song!!! How completely sweet and the little birds on the Blue Willow finally have their story!!1Lynn ...https://www.blogger.com/profile/07382971041901122845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-51955990880161086952010-05-15T21:45:56.946+10:002010-05-15T21:45:56.946+10:00really a beautiful magpie...immortalized forever i...really a beautiful magpie...immortalized forever in your words, like porcelin...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-54993460375503024722010-05-15T15:18:41.911+10:002010-05-15T15:18:41.911+10:00Excellent! This is one of the best pieces of poet...Excellent! This is one of the best pieces of poetry I've read in a while. You're use of the language is to be commended. Very, very well done.Yemallahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08681206942154859520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-20726649246680298992010-05-15T07:26:46.360+10:002010-05-15T07:26:46.360+10:00Your "simple little verse" is just right...Your "simple little verse" is just right! Lovely.~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-46216901030988943022010-05-15T00:58:29.226+10:002010-05-15T00:58:29.226+10:00lovely poem on the willow pattern blue birds. The ...lovely poem on the willow pattern blue birds. The tile is a great touch. Thank you for stopping by to visit my site. I always like to return the favor...Karma.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-72977747034938308142010-05-15T00:22:27.216+10:002010-05-15T00:22:27.216+10:00I enjoy your good photos, clever rhymes, and posit...I enjoy your good photos, clever rhymes, and positive outlook. Thank you ma'am.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10390386422182379201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-4318735663971769952010-05-14T23:24:26.180+10:002010-05-14T23:24:26.180+10:00On a hundred thousand teapots! Lovely piece.On a hundred thousand teapots! Lovely piece.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-67541673209713452232010-05-14T22:49:07.224+10:002010-05-14T22:49:07.224+10:00A beautiful capturing of the story and its meaning...A beautiful capturing of the story and its meaning. Thanks.Steve Capelinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14838386764407644146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-73259006153183173072010-05-14T21:57:31.442+10:002010-05-14T21:57:31.442+10:00Very interesting and beautiful. Loved it!Very interesting and beautiful. Loved it!Vanessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00034759853236826891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-56391829018858964102010-05-14T20:58:05.180+10:002010-05-14T20:58:05.180+10:00I felt emerged in the plate. Beautiful!I felt emerged in the plate. Beautiful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11682590088361102336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-46338778604480028262010-05-14T18:02:57.598+10:002010-05-14T18:02:57.598+10:00yup...i understand...
their serene figure and per...yup...i understand...<br /><br />their serene figure and perfect shape...is fashionable for wares and the likes....<br /><br />God bless you....<br /><br />You amazed meInayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08366875898716215059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-62363283146837513902010-05-14T15:43:43.704+10:002010-05-14T15:43:43.704+10:00star-crossed lovers and their immortal tale... suc...star-crossed lovers and their immortal tale... such beauty hidden in the darkness ... and the darkness hidden in the beauty of this plate...<br /><br />and your acrostic on Karma was so nice. Do you know, Karma is a Sanskrit word , originated from India (my country). Almost whole of the Hindu religion (the primary religion on India) is based on the Principle of Karma. We blv that even if you think bad for someone, it always comes back to bite us.<br /><br />Buddhism took this concept and made it more known throughout the world... If only more ppl blvd in it. Karma puts our duty (the literal meaning of Karma is - do your duty) to humanity before any thing else...<br /><br />there would be more peace in the world.<br /><br />PS: i m sorry if i bored you with my long comment.. its just that your words made me think :)<br /><br />PS2: Following ur blog :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-49764464085321836882010-05-14T12:18:50.203+10:002010-05-14T12:18:50.203+10:00Nicely done.Nicely done.Catalysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-72587026525341296382010-05-14T09:37:52.488+10:002010-05-14T09:37:52.488+10:00The Willow pattern was my mother's place servi...The Willow pattern was my mother's place service! I have one as a souvenier, (Johnson & Johnson). I never new that it was the birds that were of interest!Margaret Gosden https://www.blogger.com/profile/00253407541215420119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-79031525703824980332010-05-14T07:55:12.051+10:002010-05-14T07:55:12.051+10:00A dark story, indeed. Interesting and convoluted.A dark story, indeed. Interesting and convoluted.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.com