tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post7227577064530449880..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Breaking the Rule!Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-83781472718180679572010-09-23T08:23:55.428+10:002010-09-23T08:23:55.428+10:00Laughed when I read that first poem and wanted to ...Laughed when I read that first poem and wanted to shout--GO GIRL GOLindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-33467730258772985322010-09-23T05:32:01.859+10:002010-09-23T05:32:01.859+10:00Your first poem made me laugh, and your second one...Your first poem made me laugh, and your second one made me stop to think. Nicely done.<br /><br />-NicoleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-83421044869952363212010-09-23T02:50:36.494+10:002010-09-23T02:50:36.494+10:00do people still snipe at you for caps? you'd ...do people still snipe at you for caps? you'd think that with so many using wonky little keyboards that would be a lost cause<br />...she said with no caps from her iPod (which corrected it's own name.barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-8546572456403834522010-09-23T01:16:38.148+10:002010-09-23T01:16:38.148+10:00So enjoyed first line about age and 'beyond al...So enjoyed first line about age and 'beyond all shaming' for this seems an unexpected gift of aging. One is less self-consciousness and acts from spiritedness within. Am appreciative of social observation overturning pop culture slogan, We Are The World. Also appreciate the skillfulness of the rhyme and meter of line flow.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-13720639579301329292010-09-22T23:42:15.642+10:002010-09-22T23:42:15.642+10:00I LOVE BOTH OF THESE. OLD PEOPLE NEED TO FLAME ON ...I LOVE BOTH OF THESE. OLD PEOPLE NEED TO FLAME ON OCCASION AND IT'S WONDROUS TO SEE. BOTH THE OLD AND THE BOLD, AS WELL AS THE LESSON OF THE DINOSAURS. OH YES! THANKS AGAIN, YOUR USUAL PITHY STATEMENTS ARE ALWAYS WELCOME!<br /><br />ELIZABETHElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/an-exception/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-30466129468307371282010-09-22T22:46:44.063+10:002010-09-22T22:46:44.063+10:00YOU ARE SHOUTING, LOL! Your choice of course!YOU ARE SHOUTING, LOL! Your choice of course!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-77084924297324083592010-09-22T19:37:51.809+10:002010-09-22T19:37:51.809+10:00You use capitals if you want to! The language and ...You use capitals if you want to! The language and context should show whether you are ranting or merely being capricious. I love the message in 'We aren't the World' too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-22051761775174064832010-09-22T18:43:48.388+10:002010-09-22T18:43:48.388+10:00And then there was e.e. cummings!
I used to try t...And then there was e.e. cummings!<br /><br />I used to try to emulate HIS style.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-69929701827860981912010-09-22T18:32:20.694+10:002010-09-22T18:32:20.694+10:00And here is mine:
ode to un-punctuated versesAnd here is mine:<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/ode-to-un-puntuated-verses.html" rel="nofollow">ode to un-punctuated verses</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-89326990061242203572010-09-22T01:53:53.950+10:002010-09-22T01:53:53.950+10:00CAPITALS,CAPITALS!
BRING IT ON!
I SHUN PUNCTUATION...CAPITALS,CAPITALS!<br />BRING IT ON!<br />I SHUN PUNCTUATIONS<br />WHY MAKE AN ISSUE<br />IF OTHERS DON'T AGREE,<br />LET THEM GET A TISSUE<br />CAPITALS, CAPITALS,<br />OLD..ER..BOLD IS GOLD!gautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-51537057093529967312010-09-18T01:42:30.957+10:002010-09-18T01:42:30.957+10:00EXCEPTION TO THE RULE!
I AM OLD! ...CAPITAL LETTER...EXCEPTION TO THE RULE!<br />I AM OLD! ...CAPITAL LETTERS!... LOOK SO BOLD!<br />I'M AN EXCEPTION....... BECAUSE I'M OLD<br />I like the above lines :)<br /><br />Your poem we aren't the world targeting at the ego's that present human's have is really nice tooUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.com