tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post7017052366158970689..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Bushfire and BlessingRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-64369820351120588202011-01-31T16:21:49.936+11:002011-01-31T16:21:49.936+11:00I love the ending "grief will be green"
...I love the ending "grief will be green"<br />Nicely Done~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-87772067169624408022011-01-29T05:36:59.576+11:002011-01-29T05:36:59.576+11:00Love this, it is full promise.
PamelaLove this, it is full promise.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-21370951421313967852011-01-29T03:43:11.212+11:002011-01-29T03:43:11.212+11:00i hate when my comments sound like a cliche - beca...i hate when my comments sound like a cliche - because people have already captured in their comments the beauty of your writing :). your poem is exquisite, both due to the merciless description in the first part, and to the hope rising from the second. the line "The blitzcrieg of blistering blazing." is very expressive. but just like all the others said, the last lines <br />"The grief<br />Will be green"<br />are the candy on the cake!Liliana Negoihttp://summaryofmysoul.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-76021807824041205542011-01-29T02:40:43.073+11:002011-01-29T02:40:43.073+11:00You have described a bushfire as only one who has ...You have described a bushfire as only one who has seen it first hand. The worst image for me always is the charred remains of animals who could not out-run the blaze...Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-13467112019544166212011-01-29T01:42:39.513+11:002011-01-29T01:42:39.513+11:00'In two years time
The grief
Will be green....'In two years time<br />The grief<br />Will be green.'<br /><br />I love those lines, Brenda.Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-30083572132002623822011-01-28T20:33:04.023+11:002011-01-28T20:33:04.023+11:00This is brilliant!
I love how you captured the sh...This is brilliant!<br /><br />I love how you captured the shock and intensity in the first half of the poem and then in the middle you showed the sense of coming to terms with it. Then you showed the resurrection that nature brings forth and <br />"In two years time<br />The grief<br />Will be green."<br />Is such a perfect ending.<br /><br />I always like your poems but this one really captured me, I thought it was so well done! :-)Susannahhttp://outofmyocean.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-8309923225769386192011-01-28T15:55:02.759+11:002011-01-28T15:55:02.759+11:00I LOVE this poem, and most especially "in two...I LOVE this poem, and most especially "in two years time, the grief will be green". Wonderful and hopeful - and true. SO well done!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-73683611731160531152009-03-30T06:29:00.000+11:002009-03-30T06:29:00.000+11:00What promise.OK, I am laughing myself silly here, ...What promise.<BR/><BR/>OK, I am laughing myself silly here, because the captcha code for this comment is this:<BR/><BR/>ungrump<BR/><BR/><BR/>too funny.LA Nickershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14891624164014505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-61983698430482258632009-03-17T01:07:00.000+11:002009-03-17T01:07:00.000+11:00I remember the tsunami in our Country. So well sai...I remember the tsunami in our Country. So well said"... <EM> In two years time, The grief, Will be green... </EM> - Nature applies the medicine called 'time' to heal.Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00469394323819969371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-66610188189785988822009-03-14T01:03:00.000+11:002009-03-14T01:03:00.000+11:00Shades of Phoenix? Well rimed and so on target...Shades of Phoenix? Well rimed and so on target!Margaret Gosdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12588297074835472141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-45432993827559014662009-03-13T22:28:00.000+11:002009-03-13T22:28:00.000+11:00That says it so eloquently Brenda.That says it so eloquently Brenda.Winifredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12415302188575538163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-57251726015363854432009-03-13T21:33:00.000+11:002009-03-13T21:33:00.000+11:00Ain't Nature great?! As well as poem...Ain't Nature great?! As well as poem...Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com