tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post6928722835781730814..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: 216. A Winter's Tale.Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-9700696717325509962011-12-05T03:45:20.249+11:002011-12-05T03:45:20.249+11:00I love the vibrant imagery of this wonderful poem....I love the vibrant imagery of this wonderful poem. I was right there with you girls as you spread out over the road. This poem has a wonderful cadence that sweeps the reader along with it. Congratulations on having it chosen Poem of the Week.<br /><br />Namaste..........cjcj Schlottmnhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-27881942171347544142011-12-04T10:41:11.199+11:002011-12-04T10:41:11.199+11:00Nice Tale...Congrats on getting selected for Poem ...Nice Tale...Congrats on getting selected for Poem of the weekUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-69869606770183665682011-11-29T04:40:13.804+11:002011-11-29T04:40:13.804+11:00deep and elegant winter story.
wow.deep and elegant winter story.<br />wow.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-75592319046209284312011-11-28T13:42:53.268+11:002011-11-28T13:42:53.268+11:00splendid imagery! nice story!! :)
my entry: http:/...splendid imagery! nice story!! :)<br />my entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/10/28/ratatouille/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-63651637575405860292008-12-27T21:35:00.000+11:002008-12-27T21:35:00.000+11:00You've captured "the moment" after "the event" so ...You've captured "the moment" after "the event" so wonderfully Brenda. The poem literally makes us listen to the thoughts running through your minds, as you marched back home.<BR/><BR/>Loved these lines...<BR/><BR/>Yet such a sense of companionship<BR/>Pervaded that night<BR/>That I remember the silence<BR/>As a meaningful conversation.Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00469394323819969371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-40061408635940174362008-12-02T11:28:00.000+11:002008-12-02T11:28:00.000+11:00that was fantastic...i could see the whole thing i...that was fantastic...i could see the whole thing in my mind! :)*~sis~*https://www.blogger.com/profile/16180018591824851082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-84108678902074617522008-12-01T04:25:00.000+11:002008-12-01T04:25:00.000+11:00I felt myself marching along with you. You made me...I felt myself marching along with you. You made me feel as if I were right there. Lovely.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-44321201373529376912008-12-01T04:20:00.000+11:002008-12-01T04:20:00.000+11:00Who needs the lights and snow and ho ho ho when th...Who needs the lights and snow and ho ho ho when there is silent communication and the stars and the frost. So Lovely!presenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16853240090222371220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-61549117588627426062008-11-30T15:39:00.000+11:002008-11-30T15:39:00.000+11:00Great imagery - nice post!Great imagery - nice post!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15334812243182354729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-35510641135826511292008-11-30T12:56:00.000+11:002008-11-30T12:56:00.000+11:00A lovely piece of vivid imagery and delightful wor...A lovely piece of vivid imagery and delightful words. Lovely.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-21413369290266431772008-11-30T12:46:00.000+11:002008-11-30T12:46:00.000+11:00Absolutely lovely and I can relate to walk with fr...Absolutely lovely and I can relate to walk with friends who feel connected in silence and sound in the night Great poem I love the lasts parts fantasticMarjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-77039241571387986182008-11-30T10:24:00.000+11:002008-11-30T10:24:00.000+11:00I really love how this ends :) So sweet! I must sa...I really love how this ends :) So sweet! I must say Cat Stevens was distracting me while I read it. It's hard to keep up with two good things at the same time hahaDevil Moodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-45433055820492874612008-11-30T04:14:00.000+11:002008-11-30T04:14:00.000+11:00wonderful! I loved it. Especially the pyramid at t...wonderful! I loved it. Especially the pyramid at the end.Lilibethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04031218249072893776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-18648312611234063782008-11-30T01:11:00.000+11:002008-11-30T01:11:00.000+11:00I felt as if I were walking along with you. I esp...I felt as if I were walking along with you. I especially like the way the tempo changes near the end.Roanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01841824351740989301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-15566637081486120772008-11-30T00:31:00.000+11:002008-11-30T00:31:00.000+11:00The feeling of friendship lasts forever and you cp...The feeling of friendship lasts forever and you cpatured it perfectly in thises lines. I really like, <BR/>"I remember the silence<BR/>As a meaningful conversation."Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-7938154318704315022008-11-29T20:40:00.000+11:002008-11-29T20:40:00.000+11:00That was visually perfect - I was there with you. ...That was visually perfect - I was there with you. And the whole thing was wrapped up in a beautiful, almost lyrical style.<BR/>Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-34735729223094888232008-11-29T18:16:00.000+11:002008-11-29T18:16:00.000+11:00Hi Brenda -Happy Thanksgiving... ;) ...just pull...Hi Brenda -<BR/><BR/>Happy Thanksgiving... ;) <I>...just pulling your proverbial leg!</I><BR/><BR/>We give each other the 'bird' at this time of year -- here in the colonies.<BR/><BR/>I really enjoyed this post, it was rich with life and living -- thank you for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-76768192754267630842008-11-29T14:39:00.000+11:002008-11-29T14:39:00.000+11:00At school, in UK, we just wanted snow in winter (o...At school, in UK, we just wanted snow in winter (often let down). school holidays meant just one thing - Christmas day, and presents.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-38746364344634094942008-11-29T13:59:00.000+11:002008-11-29T13:59:00.000+11:00oh how musically delightful this was to read. It r...oh how musically delightful this was to read. It really reads like a song.. I especially loved... no lights no snow no ho ho ho.<BR/>What a wonderful memory to share, I felt I was right there in 1947 walking along with you and your friends.Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11442070518518821892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-42626979803562299822008-11-29T12:43:00.000+11:002008-11-29T12:43:00.000+11:00I do believe I see a couple of constellations amon...I do believe I see a couple of constellations among those stars - make the photo larger and you will see that you were not alone! AnonymousAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-41624705283851023692008-11-29T12:40:00.000+11:002008-11-29T12:40:00.000+11:00Beautiful imagery.Beautiful imagery.lillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08065006273091905792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-76013778132739633792008-11-29T11:52:00.000+11:002008-11-29T11:52:00.000+11:00Your words are magical & evocative!Now your me...Your words are magical & evocative!<BR/>Now your memory is also ours. thank you very much for that.<BR/>Aloha from Waikiki-Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com