tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post6919886494019091154..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: The Curtain PartedRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-29587047684416470242011-03-28T06:44:44.204+11:002011-03-28T06:44:44.204+11:00This was amazing. Wow. It was so visual...you ...This was amazing. Wow. It was so visual...you pulled me in, made me wonder, made me mourn.<br /><br />Really excellent. I'm impressed.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-21717053565341768212011-03-22T22:55:07.929+11:002011-03-22T22:55:07.929+11:00It is difficult to know when to intervene in such ...It is difficult to know when to intervene in such circumstances. How dreadful to carry such remorse.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-82560065234318141132011-03-21T10:23:26.934+11:002011-03-21T10:23:26.934+11:00"Curtain Parting" describes everyone'..."Curtain Parting" describes everyone's nightmare of seeing something, letting imagination take hold in a ghoulish way, and then the feeling of despair, helplessness, perhaps even guilt when that sense of foreboding culminates in a crime. <br /><br />Very tightly and masterfully written.PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-33284699751265046752011-03-21T10:19:57.357+11:002011-03-21T10:19:57.357+11:00Deep and thought provoking. Well done!Deep and thought provoking. Well done!gaelikaahttp://gaelikaasdiary.blogspot.com/2011/03/saturday-centus-46.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-70499923677446526122011-03-21T08:04:25.507+11:002011-03-21T08:04:25.507+11:00A little creepy but well crafted! You caught ever...A little creepy but well crafted! You caught everyone's attention with this poem.<br /><br />Namaste..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://theredsweater.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-5699450023384676042011-03-21T04:50:00.459+11:002011-03-21T04:50:00.459+11:00excellent postexcellent postTracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17104766436816377485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-61223352990073182062011-03-21T02:10:31.659+11:002011-03-21T02:10:31.659+11:00Loved your centus! It had a Poe-like feeling...lik...Loved your centus! It had a Poe-like feeling...like reading about the raven and wondering with a feeling of foreboding where the whole thing was headed.<br /><br />Excellent!<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-55404583253866465612011-03-21T00:53:06.448+11:002011-03-21T00:53:06.448+11:00Excellent use of the prompt. This was so well writ...Excellent use of the prompt. This was so well written, I can tell that the words just flowed. Well done! KatKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-18162609632287832682011-03-20T20:42:02.153+11:002011-03-20T20:42:02.153+11:00Excellent! I am so glad that you posted as is, and...Excellent! I am so glad that you posted as is, and did not try to keep within the 100 words.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/03/mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday-centus-week_20.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's SC week 46 'curtain parted'</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-14916551435594286652011-03-20T15:13:41.189+11:002011-03-20T15:13:41.189+11:00I was totally engrosed..
stretched drumsI was totally engrosed..<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/03/stretched-drums.html" rel="nofollow">stretched drums</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-10037427037160035252011-03-20T09:50:04.868+11:002011-03-20T09:50:04.868+11:00wow, that was very compelling... you are one talen...wow, that was very compelling... you are one talented lady!Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270665398498790951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-60193747631441717192011-03-20T08:56:12.577+11:002011-03-20T08:56:12.577+11:00Very entertaining pieces! You are quite a talente...Very entertaining pieces! You are quite a talented writer! Well done!Tgoettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-37419174401952639872011-03-20T08:01:06.736+11:002011-03-20T08:01:06.736+11:00wow, great poem. and now, I'm sad for the gir...wow, great poem. and now, I'm sad for the girl.Dazee Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323163539682131873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-55014478166336371132011-03-20T07:08:11.792+11:002011-03-20T07:08:11.792+11:00You are just sooo good at this!!!!!You are just sooo good at this!!!!!Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-27343581455884307602011-03-20T01:54:22.405+11:002011-03-20T01:54:22.405+11:00Oh my, oh my, what to do...the mystery of it all.....Oh my, oh my, what to do...the mystery of it all...what a fantastic photo to go along with your stunning poem!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-57724338404061438342011-03-20T00:53:16.871+11:002011-03-20T00:53:16.871+11:00Brenda, I'm really enjoying your poetry and yo...Brenda, I'm really enjoying your poetry and your song. Curtain Parted is compelling. Your song is so timely. Have a great day.Linda M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00847981779162054822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-26134081909933065202011-03-19T23:55:50.025+11:002011-03-19T23:55:50.025+11:00Beautiful post.
Darryl and Ruth : )Beautiful post. <br /><br />Darryl and Ruth : )Living In Williamsburg Virginiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14442680855290062641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-88465237955773740442011-03-19T23:47:09.654+11:002011-03-19T23:47:09.654+11:00Loved the poem! Excellent job!Loved the poem! Excellent job!Kim Lehnhoffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02516002280882854450noreply@blogger.com