tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post6281429392277320847..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: The Doomed DressRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-39991909913471744142011-10-20T00:24:57.487+11:002011-10-20T00:24:57.487+11:00Sure, blame it on the dress. ;)
Great sense of pl...Sure, blame it on the dress. ;)<br /><br />Great sense of place and humor in this one. I enjoyed your poem-story.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-1141569434395294022011-10-17T14:26:48.685+11:002011-10-17T14:26:48.685+11:00I am always amazed by your ability to sustain rhym...I am always amazed by your ability to sustain rhyme and meter over the distance, especially when given a random list of words with which to construct something meaningful. I'm delighted with this piece, especially the part about the Vicar's Raspberry Wine. Sounds delicious!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/itchy-feet/" rel="nofollow">My Whirl</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-10926421280391782032011-10-17T02:04:25.824+11:002011-10-17T02:04:25.824+11:00Oww, Rinkly, the photo set the tone. I was already...Oww, Rinkly, the photo set the tone. I was already laughing as I began reading. The laughter increased all the way through. You have a gift.Mike Patrickhttp://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-33249125418683535362011-10-17T00:45:12.895+11:002011-10-17T00:45:12.895+11:00Awww what a sad night. A bit like my teens semi pr...Awww what a sad night. A bit like my teens semi prom. She went all dressed up to the nines so that a boy she's sweet on would ask her to dance and, it was such a huge let down for her.<br />Aww poor girl LOL<br />Great use of the prompt! :)<br />Loved your second piece~!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-16309993240192692422011-10-17T00:43:45.074+11:002011-10-17T00:43:45.074+11:00alas, the dress.
love the fractured causalityalas, the dress.<br />love the fractured causalitybarbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/for-the-whirl-lamentation/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-90029792588679953032011-10-17T00:35:16.499+11:002011-10-17T00:35:16.499+11:00Oh, this had me in stitches. LOL
Excellent contr...Oh, this had me in stitches. LOL<br /><br />Excellent contribution to the whirl this week. Perhaps it was the perfect dress for a date with a creep. :)brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-40264818063325562562011-10-17T00:06:15.107+11:002011-10-17T00:06:15.107+11:00Oh, what a delightful tale you wove with the wordl...Oh, what a delightful tale you wove with the wordle words this time. And yes, of course, one would blame the dress. LOL.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-29452804646819166852011-10-16T23:53:47.438+11:002011-10-16T23:53:47.438+11:00Fun narrative... sounds like quite the disaster fo...Fun narrative... sounds like quite the disaster for the poor girl.<br /><br />I love the second piece.<br /><br />http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2011/10/dancing-at-oceans-edge.html/Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-69260453853349212992011-10-16T20:16:36.809+11:002011-10-16T20:16:36.809+11:00O it's wonderful to be reading your vibrant st...O it's wonderful to be reading your vibrant stries in verse again! This one is a delightful twisted tale!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.com