tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post432181431931540712..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: That Song!Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-51641498207179222832012-10-17T22:43:41.135+11:002012-10-17T22:43:41.135+11:00way fun rhythm you have going in your song. there ...way fun rhythm you have going in your song. there is an interesting attraction between cousins - a familiarity and a strangerness both. it is a unique relationship.<br /><br />the second work has that all powerful point that brings it all together - i like that - that amazing and vast sea and sky. cool. aloha. Rick.Daddariohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15663525408951676104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-14986526172652241482012-10-17T08:38:05.767+11:002012-10-17T08:38:05.767+11:00Oh my goodness, your second piece made me yearn fo...Oh my goodness, your second piece made me yearn for a home by the sea. A desert-dweller, I'm finding that the week or two each year I manage to be by the sea are no longer enough!<br /><br /><br />http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/10/16/flowing-example/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-76426794862447448782012-10-17T05:26:14.438+11:002012-10-17T05:26:14.438+11:00I also loved them both, Brenda. You did wonders wi...I also loved them both, Brenda. You did wonders with the Wordle, making me think of my first love— whom I actually didn't recognize when I met him 15 years later. <br />By then, I lived in a town perched on the edge of the Pacific (although many islands are between it and the wide open ocean).<br />Now I live on the prairie and I miss the ocean far more than I miss that young man.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-53420540053922599862012-10-16T07:26:40.369+11:002012-10-16T07:26:40.369+11:00Each of them as wonderful as the other. I love th...Each of them as wonderful as the other. I love the prose piece alot, the memory of the one true love and how we never really let go. And the second was beautiful and austere. Loved them both, great work.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-83726603310022277792012-10-16T07:02:42.625+11:002012-10-16T07:02:42.625+11:00I loved your take on the Sunday Wordle --did I spe...I loved your take on the Sunday Wordle --did I spell that correctly-- I always hope that people carry such wonderful memories in their hearts--beautiful writes--both of themAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-12090020491726947312012-10-16T06:23:01.203+11:002012-10-16T06:23:01.203+11:00you second poem really touched me...both well done...you second poem really touched me...both well done though.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-27996174746158159892012-10-16T05:27:40.998+11:002012-10-16T05:27:40.998+11:00I so loved the first poem, and envy you, in the se...I so loved the first poem, and envy you, in the second, living on the Pacific. Our Island is, but I am an hour inland, which is too far from the sea for me!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-90031042683676578952012-10-16T03:58:50.428+11:002012-10-16T03:58:50.428+11:00Wow...two great works to read. I love the story. A...Wow...two great works to read. I love the story. And yes, we cannot defy the vastness of the sea and sky.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-66026691372519892362012-10-15T21:02:25.202+11:002012-10-15T21:02:25.202+11:00We can't defy
The vastness of the sea and sky....We can't defy<br />The vastness of the sea and sky.<br /><br />You can say that again! :) Two for the price of one again - does that make you a bargain poet? hehehe!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.com