tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post8189421061863258123..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: So There!Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-45597090267637344582011-09-07T05:28:13.565+10:002011-09-07T05:28:13.565+10:00WHO DARE SAY THIS IS NOT LOVELY? I LOVE THIS. THAN...WHO DARE SAY THIS IS NOT LOVELY? I LOVE THIS. THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARINGOGUNGBESAN Last Namehttp://ogungbesan20.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-86105377890045887232011-08-12T19:46:03.559+10:002011-08-12T19:46:03.559+10:00I love your Monty monkey poem. It had a lovely rhy...I love your Monty monkey poem. It had a lovely rhythm to read and made me smile!Springcyclehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897733910237655639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-9753105276349948842011-08-08T02:41:05.034+10:002011-08-08T02:41:05.034+10:00both writes were excellent to behold - you managed...both writes were excellent to behold - you managed to make me traverse the thin rope of emotional opposites, delight to horror effortlessly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-10161457342774933292011-08-06T23:00:09.119+10:002011-08-06T23:00:09.119+10:00wow! you just pulled up my lips then pulled down m...wow! you just pulled up my lips then pulled down my heart. great writes both :)bendedspoonhttp://bendedspoon.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-61335220195529562662011-08-06T20:48:08.522+10:002011-08-06T20:48:08.522+10:00Yay Monty! I just love this little poem. Thank you...Yay Monty! I just love this little poem. Thank you!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-46804946545227078482011-08-06T11:27:30.745+10:002011-08-06T11:27:30.745+10:00I love Monty! He's quite the character :-)
Cu...I love Monty! He's quite the character :-)<br /><br />Cute poem!e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-91481991781745450722011-08-05T06:18:04.045+10:002011-08-05T06:18:04.045+10:00Tsk ! tsk ! tsk ! Naughty Monty - how could he dro...Tsk ! tsk ! tsk ! Naughty Monty - how could he drop a coconut on somebody's head ... refreshing , fun and light-hearted ...!MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-7-safari-gathering/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-16118346064007100202011-08-04T23:47:47.914+10:002011-08-04T23:47:47.914+10:00I loved these two poems. The monkey adventure was ...I loved these two poems. The monkey adventure was really good. The lock was truly heart rending. Both are very well written.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06195130371089856924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-79078221998000138862011-08-04T19:04:17.130+10:002011-08-04T19:04:17.130+10:00Very cute story with the monkey but the second poe...Very cute story with the monkey but the second poem was heart-rending so much pain and anger. I don't know if it's only a story but I did come from an abusive home so it really got to me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-37362972129536097942011-08-04T14:08:14.427+10:002011-08-04T14:08:14.427+10:00Enjoyed both of these poems--very different of cou...Enjoyed both of these poems--very different of course, but each providing a unique perspective. Like your humor in the first one :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-16322894634127133332011-08-04T10:35:42.147+10:002011-08-04T10:35:42.147+10:00Great one on the prompt--So There. The other one i...Great one on the prompt--So There. The other one is dark and disturbing, written almost as if you lived it--hopefully that isn't so! Enjoyed both. Love your writing!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/03/be-no-evil/noreply@blogger.com