tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post7795877523701349066..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Not Waving But DrowningRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-51755070253653704282010-12-17T03:49:08.686+11:002010-12-17T03:49:08.686+11:00Ahhh both pieces are marvelous
your imagery is tig...Ahhh both pieces are marvelous<br />your imagery is tight of the waiting, falling in love, waving - it's a poignant scene<br />and the bed - has lots to tell<br /><br />thanks <br />always glad to see you at One Shot<br /><br />smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-45863482086957975112010-12-17T01:05:31.505+11:002010-12-17T01:05:31.505+11:00Enjoyed both poems. The former really grips at my ...Enjoyed both poems. The former really grips at my heartstrings. Wonderful word choices and full of feeling.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-7336041900645971742010-12-16T20:29:43.095+11:002010-12-16T20:29:43.095+11:00Brenda,
How come she's cool to him. Something&...Brenda,<br />How come she's cool to him. Something's got to give. Excellent!kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-84083075947369774042010-12-16T08:02:02.530+11:002010-12-16T08:02:02.530+11:00Related to the strangers on a train; but I found k...Related to the strangers on a train; but I found kindness and good manners pay off in friendship if not love. I once had parties on my "go to work" bus. <br />Re: unmade bed. Give up the guilt. I read that you're healthier if you leave your bed unmade...all the micros die if exposed to air and sunlight. Covered they breed...so smile for that!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-45172034004246693402010-12-15T15:49:15.703+11:002010-12-15T15:49:15.703+11:00Ohh... Unmade bed was so so so creative, Brenda!! ...Ohh... Unmade bed was so so so creative, Brenda!! Lovely!!<br />And Drowning... wooooowwww... so dreaming... and so evocative.. Totally enjoyed the rhymes!!! I think I have been there myself! In fact, I am still drowning in his eyes, but only now, he has seen me and we are together :) You will know what I mean if you read my One Shot :)<br /><br />Best Wishes...Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-17658033246885077602010-12-13T05:36:39.665+11:002010-12-13T05:36:39.665+11:00love always getting two for the price of one on yo...love always getting two for the price of one on your blog! Hard to say which one I liked best-they are both great!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-12143716003061132932010-12-13T04:24:18.953+11:002010-12-13T04:24:18.953+11:00Last week I listened to a radio broadcast about St...Last week I listened to a radio broadcast about Stevie Smiths poem - it was the first time I had her read it.<br /><br />Enjoyed both your poems todayAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-90322826385080241862010-12-13T02:11:22.335+11:002010-12-13T02:11:22.335+11:00great pieces. My bed always tells me I've bee...great pieces. My bed always tells me I've been restless last night!Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-81058289455406769332010-12-12T17:37:27.442+11:002010-12-12T17:37:27.442+11:00I like both pieces. The first one made me visualis...I like both pieces. The first one made me visualise this commuter scene quite vividly and I could really feel the desperation.Flying Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12835912122094846809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-74244285685790705622010-12-12T15:28:40.244+11:002010-12-12T15:28:40.244+11:00enjoyed both poems. we have all yearned for thing...enjoyed both poems. we have all yearned for things that are not to be and the bed ...mine would say ..."better get me made before your wife gets home...her pet peeve..unmade bed.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-79606321966095874522010-12-12T15:22:08.508+11:002010-12-12T15:22:08.508+11:00Very moving and clever. You do have a way with w...Very moving and clever. You do have a way with words!Margaret Gosden https://www.blogger.com/profile/00253407541215420119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-89051119841502448042010-12-12T15:16:17.981+11:002010-12-12T15:16:17.981+11:00Awww Brenda Carry on Tuesday is an exquisite piece...Awww Brenda Carry on Tuesday is an exquisite piece!! Im blown away again!! :DVibhuti Bhandarkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00145588190836915806noreply@blogger.com