tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post7609966667230839540..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: EmergingRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-46271832608614478122010-10-26T04:13:53.415+11:002010-10-26T04:13:53.415+11:00GREAT write. Fab take on the prompt. Love and Ligh...GREAT write. Fab take on the prompt. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-51252768924189444402010-10-25T13:25:48.942+11:002010-10-25T13:25:48.942+11:00gosh, i love yr two tier posts... can't help b...gosh, i love yr two tier posts... can't help but to think of kafka's metamorphosis..i guess b/c it seems sorta dark at times.... you did well on the rhyming acrostic!!!ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2010/10/24/dripping-gray/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-89963183426047778862010-10-25T09:29:06.647+11:002010-10-25T09:29:06.647+11:00so often we do not see our inner beauty, until we ...so often we do not see our inner beauty, until we can find that quiet peace at our center, and emerge to behold the miracle we are... well done Brenda...<br /><br />...robrob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-14697944189970355562010-10-25T08:49:22.379+11:002010-10-25T08:49:22.379+11:00What a beautiful and indeed heartfelt poem about e...What a beautiful and indeed heartfelt poem about emerging. As I read it I could the feelings and ideas so many ways. Real butterfly, metaphorical butterfly--pleasure to read.Peggy Goetzhttp://ponderingspeggy.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-36572269937543116892010-10-24T14:29:55.565+11:002010-10-24T14:29:55.565+11:00The darker side of the butterfly!The darker side of the butterfly!anahttp://theperfectionproject.wordpress.com/2010/10/23/moonlit-night/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-65260831710506151262010-10-24T05:17:20.416+11:002010-10-24T05:17:20.416+11:00Truly a lovely 'emerging' poem!Truly a lovely 'emerging' poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-31248068001744418042010-10-24T03:45:26.565+11:002010-10-24T03:45:26.565+11:00An emerging butterfly! What news! (However I hear...An emerging butterfly! What news! (However I heard they don't live longer than a day, LOL Don't know if that is right!) Great poem!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-62956778508218448812010-10-24T02:09:26.423+11:002010-10-24T02:09:26.423+11:00The words of an emerging butterfly. Very nice imag...The words of an emerging butterfly. Very nice images! <a href="http://strummedwords.blogspot.com/2010/10/writers-island-poetry-emerge.html" rel="nofollow">My Writer's Island contribution</a>Strummed Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-89909806201837571602010-10-23T23:20:39.146+11:002010-10-23T23:20:39.146+11:00The theme might be a bit of a cliché, but you have...The theme might be a bit of a cliché, but you have really brought it to life in un unclichéd poem. A nice one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-26581166575746502722010-10-23T23:10:18.969+11:002010-10-23T23:10:18.969+11:00You described the biological metamorphosis of a bu...You described the biological metamorphosis of a butterfly poetical in this poem...That was awesome...perfectly done and best way to follow the prompt.<br /><br />Cheers!Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-41848057647767882362010-10-23T20:51:59.752+11:002010-10-23T20:51:59.752+11:00I too think of butterflies as soon as I hear the w...I too think of butterflies as soon as I hear the word emerging. But, also have a liking for fairytales revisited. Wonderful job on both pieces,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-75603511981868093482010-10-23T19:37:09.494+11:002010-10-23T19:37:09.494+11:00A pleasure to read.A pleasure to read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com