tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post6762768735828069984..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Australian AutumnRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-15830956575547090592011-04-10T17:00:05.998+10:002011-04-10T17:00:05.998+10:00i really enjoyed reading that...as summer as just ...i really enjoyed reading that...as summer as just kicking in in my part of the world it was refreshing to cast my mid back, very well captured and written..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-17661752372044327872011-04-10T12:42:20.160+10:002011-04-10T12:42:20.160+10:00I don't believe it! We both tried a triolet on...I don't believe it! We both tried a triolet on Autumn! Your poem is very descriptive of autumn's feel! beautiful!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-7578077402271218462011-04-10T10:23:30.442+10:002011-04-10T10:23:30.442+10:00Lovely triolet..we have the right to alter it here...Lovely triolet..we have the right to alter it here and there. You added a couple of anapests and reshaped a line to make it sing warmer and more autumnal. Quite beautiful!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-29175754088640121342011-04-10T08:45:48.039+10:002011-04-10T08:45:48.039+10:00ah a beautiful triolet you captured the essence of...ah a beautiful triolet you captured the essence of autumnBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-5542508615189791232011-04-10T04:19:18.222+10:002011-04-10T04:19:18.222+10:00Great attempt on a triolet! The fourth line should...Great attempt on a triolet! The fourth line should be the repeat refrain apart from that your rhythm and lines are bang on! Loved the summery feel you gave this little dance too :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-57517428279071617292011-04-10T01:47:31.622+10:002011-04-10T01:47:31.622+10:00A brilliant triolet. This form would give me nigh...A brilliant triolet. This form would give me nightmares if I let it. You've made it look easy!Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-81826745746827035392011-04-10T00:26:31.921+10:002011-04-10T00:26:31.921+10:00Ah, at last another person who can fully appreciat...Ah, at last another person who can fully appreciate the Autumn months of April (while the rest of the world seems gaga about Spring!)<br />I love this poem, especially the line:<br />The earth rewinds it's yearly spool...Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-37631067926669070082011-04-09T23:34:16.802+10:002011-04-09T23:34:16.802+10:00Brenda... hello from chilly Johannesburg.
I love ...Brenda... hello from chilly Johannesburg.<br /><br />I love both the poems... Could feel the seasons. Is the 2nd one any particular form? Or is it just as you wrote it...Catherine Mackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07740025648799655351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-33374439886614255362011-04-09T23:25:21.907+10:002011-04-09T23:25:21.907+10:00you've described Autumn perfectly!
I will ha...you've described Autumn perfectly! <br /><br />I will have to try this form. <br /><br />wonderful write! love the photo's!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-68685027286870962892011-04-09T17:46:41.394+10:002011-04-09T17:46:41.394+10:00This is a lovely poem Blenda, it echoes emotions. ...This is a lovely poem Blenda, it echoes emotions. Great rhyme, don't know much about triolet but I am learning about it from u seeing words like yellow, cool, thanks for sharing this.KEHINDE ADESANYAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13669844214844226766noreply@blogger.com