tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post6283817438962482824..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: A Bite Ago!Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-76374113294102859282010-09-08T05:59:12.582+10:002010-09-08T05:59:12.582+10:00FANTASTIC!!! I am thrilled about this poem, cuz yo...FANTASTIC!!! I am thrilled about this poem, cuz you know what! You have written it from Adam's point of view, and I have focused on Eve in my Mag! :)<br />This is amazing!! Two "great blogger minds" thought alike... heheheh<br />I am so glad I came by!!! <br /><br />THOROUGHLY enjoyed this "first" story!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-23244114584516934362010-09-08T00:23:36.320+10:002010-09-08T00:23:36.320+10:00oh to be back before she bit the apple. what a fu...oh to be back before she bit the apple. what a fun magpie, i enjoyed the flow of it too!Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-16364182686218988542010-09-07T10:19:29.634+10:002010-09-07T10:19:29.634+10:00Both well written, with just a reference to the be...Both well written, with just a reference to the beginnings of decision and free will.<br /><br />And how our free will has effected this economy, hasn't it?Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-24369218081097740552010-09-07T05:49:53.172+10:002010-09-07T05:49:53.172+10:00I love the idea of Adam and Eve just sitting aroun...I love the idea of Adam and Eve just sitting around talking about memories.Tattered and Losthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00208918251232477186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-90263552388972622902010-09-06T05:31:52.365+10:002010-09-06T05:31:52.365+10:00Wonderfully readable and suitably ponderable!Wonderfully readable and suitably ponderable!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-59352222208584624142010-09-06T00:14:08.001+10:002010-09-06T00:14:08.001+10:00Two for the price of one has to be good! :)Two for the price of one has to be good! :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-39405372724870636142010-09-05T23:53:39.480+10:002010-09-05T23:53:39.480+10:00I like the biblical twist here. And the title is j...I like the biblical twist here. And the title is just perfect!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-1098150659374580732010-09-05T22:03:27.709+10:002010-09-05T22:03:27.709+10:00Effortlessy written, just wonderful!Effortlessy written, just wonderful!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-22313416646313110792010-09-05T04:41:11.890+10:002010-09-05T04:41:11.890+10:00thought provoking...
lovely done!thought provoking...<br />lovely done!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-36130179136206388712010-09-05T01:06:26.293+10:002010-09-05T01:06:26.293+10:00a bite ago - wonderful writing - yeah and so sad s...a bite ago - wonderful writing - yeah and so sad she took the apple<br /><br /><a href="http://splittergewitter.blogspot.com/2010/09/consume-me-magpie-tale.html" rel="nofollow">here's my magpie</a>Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-24170727226589774762010-09-04T20:46:06.270+10:002010-09-04T20:46:06.270+10:00it does leave one to wonder there thoughts in that...it does leave one to wonder there thoughts in that moment after...nice mag!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-33236057436409991772010-09-04T09:10:19.431+10:002010-09-04T09:10:19.431+10:00Let's have some fun! that is my motto :)
A ve...Let's have some fun! that is my motto :)<br /><br />A very nice Magpie, really enjoyed it.Gabriela Abalohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11316879938383542026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-36630823108213208342010-09-04T03:33:17.523+10:002010-09-04T03:33:17.523+10:00A most entertaining response to the prompt. Very e...A most entertaining response to the prompt. Very enjoyable. Thank you.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-25410851910354267502010-09-04T02:05:05.805+10:002010-09-04T02:05:05.805+10:00Love the feeling and flow of your Magpie ... and, ...Love the feeling and flow of your Magpie ... and, the acrostic too!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-18652959578610896732010-09-04T01:22:37.018+10:002010-09-04T01:22:37.018+10:00Oh the start of it all - an apple. Great Magpie :)...Oh the start of it all - an apple. Great Magpie :)Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-31808258598288492762010-09-04T00:25:56.276+10:002010-09-04T00:25:56.276+10:00Two very enjoyable, clever pieces. Great magpie wo...Two very enjoyable, clever pieces. Great magpie work! Thanks for visiting me...Janicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10882248671520480556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-5252845853581005322010-09-03T22:43:11.354+10:002010-09-03T22:43:11.354+10:00this was very cute your last two lines being a per...this was very cute your last two lines being a perfect ending to set the rhythm of the poem. Mine was similar in its first man and women indications!Amanda Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-47496810232175636402010-09-03T22:36:36.567+10:002010-09-03T22:36:36.567+10:00I liked them both....yes it was created perfect, w...I liked them both....yes it was created perfect, why is man so flawed? I'm wondering lately if it is the nature of man, the way he is created. Perfect in this creation. And now it is man, who has decided he has an addiction he would like to cure? Change is difficult especially if it is the nature of the beast. Do you think you could change a tiger? Teach him to have manners?annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-51027576308937397402010-09-03T14:59:21.993+10:002010-09-03T14:59:21.993+10:00Perfect perfect...bravo!Perfect perfect...bravo!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-40824059832596879642010-09-03T09:18:54.269+10:002010-09-03T09:18:54.269+10:00Wonderful! I loved it, what fun.Wonderful! I loved it, what fun.Marilyn & Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00851884880790561276noreply@blogger.com