tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post29032889378397527..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Distant MemoryRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-761051986310105402010-09-22T16:22:02.182+10:002010-09-22T16:22:02.182+10:00As always very nice poem.Yes what really matter is...As always very nice poem.Yes what really matter is the self..all else as you said<br /> "Friends, relations, colleagues have grown dust upon the shelf."<br /><br />True..when we recall earlier days nothing matters much..<br />Enjoyed reading..gave too many thoughts..the way you make us think by drawing a realistic picture..grat dear.rashmihttp://poem-myworldofexcitement.blogspot.com/2010/09/dear-grandpa.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-58035179658243004282010-09-20T08:39:51.083+10:002010-09-20T08:39:51.083+10:00A wonderful 'memory' poem, Brenda. It says...A wonderful 'memory' poem, Brenda. It says so much. Lovely writing.Paul Andrew Russellhttp://www.paulandrewrussell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-91470079585788210842010-09-19T07:34:53.217+10:002010-09-19T07:34:53.217+10:00Looking back, he was nothing much; just the only m...<i>Looking back, he was nothing much; just the only man around.<br />Friends, relations, colleagues have grown dust upon the shelf.<br />Whom do I really remember?<br />Myself.</i><br /><br />...so true...like this journey you took us on.Dasuntouchahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07702658573117359403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-75224959934057662692010-09-19T02:28:28.976+10:002010-09-19T02:28:28.976+10:00I really related to this poem, especially the love...I really related to this poem, especially the love affair that turned out to be not so special after all, hee hee! Very well expressed!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-57735194967294039802010-09-19T01:46:14.162+10:002010-09-19T01:46:14.162+10:00You've captured the fragmented quality of memo...You've captured the fragmented quality of memory so well, Brenda. I particularly like the comments on self-delusion, something I was all too good at when younger. In the midst of everything, we do have to remember ourselves.<br /><br />Wonderful poem...<br /><br />LynetteLynette Killamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747902602019771481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-22028549354426717322010-09-18T06:48:57.701+10:002010-09-18T06:48:57.701+10:00Brenda,
I love your poem, since it ticks all the b...Brenda,<br />I love your poem, since it ticks all the boxes for all that we try to remember from our journey through life.<br />I particularly like the line,'friends, relations and colleagues have grown dust upon the shelf'.<br />Such very true words!!!<br />Best wishes,<br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-29081982861802214422010-09-18T06:15:08.867+10:002010-09-18T06:15:08.867+10:00So much wisdom in your poem. So true, if one looks...So much wisdom in your poem. So true, if one looks at a photograph at a later time one may 'see' a feeling that the picture doesn't seem to show. Sometimes life IS not what it seems. Well written poem.Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-62479177032081932602010-09-18T01:14:12.969+10:002010-09-18T01:14:12.969+10:00I like your take on the Memory prompt. You present...I like your take on the Memory prompt. You present an interesting viewpoint and what you say about remembrances is so true.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com