tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post1666078454294493195..comments2023-10-28T19:12:11.488+11:00Comments on RINKLY RIMES: Coming RoundRinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-2437551607614715222011-10-03T15:18:33.865+11:002011-10-03T15:18:33.865+11:00Wow! I certainly can relate to this...I had a seve...Wow! I certainly can relate to this...I had a severe car accident in 2006 that resulted in being knocked unconscious. When I started to regain consciousness I didn't know where I was, how I got there, and was temporarily blind from head trauma...<br /><br />This poem is very "real" for me!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-65652474811674430072011-10-02T08:06:18.805+11:002011-10-02T08:06:18.805+11:00Whew, by the end of your poem I was breathless! Ni...Whew, by the end of your poem I was breathless! Nice write.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-74176592145958547202011-10-02T04:18:16.442+11:002011-10-02T04:18:16.442+11:00A really powerful write.......so vividly told. Wel...A really powerful write.......so vividly told. Well done!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-60582695000164903982011-10-01T14:07:38.102+10:002011-10-01T14:07:38.102+10:00Coming Round is an interesting take on the surreal...Coming Round is an interesting take on the surreal. You have done a good job of making the reader sort of "plow through" a surreal experience that you have made another live through. I like it.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7976656567250803879.post-25648325312347953342011-10-01T13:52:12.508+10:002011-10-01T13:52:12.508+10:00Wow.... Your reply to the surreal challenge is chi...Wow.... Your reply to the surreal challenge is chilling! You have told an entire story in those lines and it's a heart-breaker. Those surreal moments when memory and reality are out of synch have been so well-captured here. Thank you for sharing your work on Real Toads.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com