Saturday, June 2, 2012

Fortress


SUNDAY SCRIBBLINGS
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FORTRESS
(An Acrostic)

Facing the on-coming army,
Overlooking the battle-field below,
Ramparts ready and waiting
To repel the attacking foe!
Rising above the tree-tops,
Every soldier sturdy and straight!
Sentinel! Defending the righteous!
See! The enemy is at the gate!
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SANDSTONE

Sometimes the dazzle of the sun and the sea
Obscure the more mundane beneath our feet.
Here is a humdrum beachside view, with all the colour bleached,
Devoid of blue and green, and breeze and heat.
And, suddenly, the sandstone reveals itself to us,
With curves and shadows, like a piece of art,
And greenery and waves recede from their normal centre-stage,
While sandstone plays the most important part.
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7 comments:

  1. Love your Acrostic and am blown away that we chose the same "fortress". The Neuschwanstein Castle. The photo of it helped me write the poem. :) Enjoyed your discovery of the colors in Sandstone; like a piece of art. Beautiful.

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  2. your ideas are always worth a few moments of time...the sandstone was awesome

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  3. loved the acrostic. it captures how one kingdom must be reading when the enemy is knocking.

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