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asks for a haiku on the topic 'Fire'
5/7/5
FIRE
The friend and the foe
Warmth, sparkle and energy
You are danger too
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Redon
THE SOUNDS OF SILENCE
The sounds of silence! A misnomer,
Unless, of course, you're in a coma.
Listen! Hear your blood go round
With that familiar swishing sound.
Listen! Hear breaths out, breaths in,
Hear them pause, hear them begin.
Listen! Hear that chirping bird.
Silence? Utterly absurd.
The traffic's hum, though far away,
Forms a background to each day.
And is that tinnitus in my ears,
Forerunner of silent future years?
Deafness! A silence that exists,
Silence that, for years, persists.
If I'm heading in that direction
It is cause for introspection.
Give me years of cacophony
So it can be a memory.
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I really enjoyed reading 'The sounds of silence'
ReplyDeletehaiku is written well and so true ~ poem is lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteWhat a great haiku! I love the poem as well. Much to think about.
ReplyDeleterespect it! respect the fire!
ReplyDeleteFriend and foe can both be fire. Which burns hotter?
ReplyDeleteWreath of Fire
The many "faces" of fire... good job!
ReplyDeleteA great take on fire, so true, it can be a friend or foe.
ReplyDeleteSuch fiery eyes....love the haiku and poem..
ReplyDeleteVery nice Haiku and Poem ... yes, I agree, the Silence has its own sounds ... sometimes it is deafening!
ReplyDeleteBlanket of Fire
I think Z has gone missing!
ReplyDeleteThoughtful take on fire - love it!
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