Monday, February 21, 2011

Hangover


MICROFICTION
http://www.stonyriver.ie/2011/02
supplied the prompt

HANGOVER!

I knew I shouldn't have drunk so much!
Now I'm really in strife!
Which room belongs to Hot-Lips
And which one to my wife?
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SHADOW ON SHINE

Shadow on shine or shine on shadow?
What a conundrum to tease the brain?
Shade and reflection, sheen and shimmer,
All set-off by the bright wood-grain.
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19 comments:

  1. PatFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    Aw, it's a shame that Hot Lips and Wife aren't one and the same.

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  2. Melanie ShermanFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Whoa, that is a pretty important decision your character must make. One could mean blissful life and the other a really messy divorce.

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  3. PeggyFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    This could be a real problem for him. Door number 1 or door number 2! Hope he thinks about it for a while.
    Very good take on this weeks pic!

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  4. VickiFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:33 PM

    LOL ... seems he has gotten himself into a predicament.

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  5. AnyesFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    What a pickle he found himself in, poor lad ;-)

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:07 PM

    As the old man said to Dr. Jones, "Choose wisely."

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  7. Doctor FTSEFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    Great to start the day with a laugh!

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  8. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    Poor old Hot Lips gets caught in a Mash re-invention! Very clever!

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  9. UnknownFebruary 21, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    Oh dear! Giggling over here!

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  10. Linda O'ConnellFebruary 21, 2011 at 11:43 PM

    Brenda,
    I am new to micro fiction and am laughing so hard. This is the funniest one yet. I have signed on to follow your blog. Please sign on mine http://lindaoconnell.blogspot.com/

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  11. jabblogFebruary 21, 2011 at 11:46 PM

    I hope he finds his way to the right room or there'll be hell to pay!

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  12. AshlingFebruary 22, 2011 at 2:19 AM

    Let's hope he learns his lesson...and finds the right door (whichever that might be)!

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  13. DianeFebruary 22, 2011 at 4:35 AM

    Hahahahaahahaha LOVE it!!! :O)

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  14. Sylvia KFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    Oh, yes! A great laugh to start my day and I love the MASH take!! Terrific! Hope your week goes well, Brenda!!

    Sylvia

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  15. Ms.DaisyFebruary 22, 2011 at 7:08 AM

    This is such a funny and good take on the week's prompt! You really made me laugh. I haven't heard "Hot Lips" in years and it brought back many Mash memories.
    Loved your poem about money also - really good stuff.

    ~Jean

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:36 AM

    This one's got my vote. ROFL!

    http://www.google.com/profiles/GrandmasGoulash.

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  17. Susan FobesFebruary 22, 2011 at 12:48 PM

    Brenda, I love your poetry-it always makes me smile :)

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  18. Michael G-GFebruary 23, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Definitely some "trouble and strife" for him in the future, methinks.

    Your poems are great, Brenda. I am amazed at how prolific you are!

    Thanks for the comment on mine. Hope your week is going well.

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  19. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    It would serve him 'well and good' to get caught! I hope both Hot Lips and Wife find out....LOL
    Great micro fiction this week. Cheers~

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