MICROFICTION
THE PRISONER!
To paraphrase....'A delicious feast
To eat beneath the bough!
A loaf of bread, a jug of wine!
But lover, where art thou!
You've thrown me in the dungeon
And I only broke one vow!'
("A loaf of bread, a jug of wine, and thou...." Omar Khayyam.)
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DAWN DAZZLE
When the summer's at its hottest,
When the sun's a cruel beast,
Then we favour early morning,
And the pageant from the east.
Get up early, get the gear on,
Venture out before it's light.
Feel the gentle breeze that's blowing,
Share the remnants of the night.
See the lovely silver pathway
As the sun begins to rise!
Such deceptive gentle glowing!
Such a devil in disguise!
All too soon we feel the burning,
All too soon the sun turns gold.
Home to breakfast and a shower.
The shiny tale of morning's told.
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Darn! I think we needed another 20 or so characters, now I'll never know which vow she broke. :) Nice!
ReplyDeleteMakes one wonder which one vow, Brenda.
ReplyDeleteGood paraphrase of Omar Khayyam.
And I love your Dawn Dazzle. It explains how I feel about summer, completely.
Kay, Alberta
A loaf of bread, a jug of wine and thee!
ReplyDeleteLiked your take on the picture.
Very sweet!
Love the rhyme...very clever...here's mine
ReplyDeletehttp://stephiles.blogspot.com/2010/10/microfiction-monday-bricked-in.html
Fun take on the pic of the day! Glad to see you join the fun! Hope you have a great week, Brenda!
ReplyDeleteSylvia
Hmmm...Which vow did she break? We can only imagine. Wonderful pooetic interpretation of this week's picture.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the Dawn Dazzle poem, too--lovely!
Delightfully lyrical.
ReplyDeleteThat must have been quite a vow to break :-)
ReplyDeleteNice one.
Great poetry, I like to live that experience in summer. Furthermore, these hours are very good for creativity, because after sleeping mind is rested. Thank you very much for your kind words. A greeting.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the microfiction and the poem that followed. I do not excel at poetry, so I appreciate it all the more because I'm envious! Terrific story, and lovely poetry.
ReplyDeleteMust have been a serious one!
ReplyDeleteSo clever.... love it! :O)
ReplyDeleteThat must have been one strict vow. Great job with the microfiction. I enjoyed your poem too!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed both the poems. Excellent. :O)
ReplyDeleteOh so curious about that one vow... LOL!
ReplyDeleteSeems she REALLY messed up.
ReplyDeletePoor girl. Doesn't everyone deserve another chance?
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